A Bashful Interview
The police question Bashful about his whereabouts.4 total reviews
Comment from Dan Diego
Well, well. Bashful gets interviewed. I created the contest and this is exactly what I had in mind. Please note that there are two instances of "...the caf�©..." This can happen when you try to enter a special character. You still have a little time to edit this before we go to the booth. Maybe just drop the "e" in there without the accent. Fine job. It is well-written, imaginative, and had realistic dialogue. Good luck. I'm off to read more entries.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Well, well. Bashful gets interviewed. I created the contest and this is exactly what I had in mind. Please note that there are two instances of "...the caf�©..." This can happen when you try to enter a special character. You still have a little time to edit this before we go to the booth. Maybe just drop the "e" in there without the accent. Fine job. It is well-written, imaginative, and had realistic dialogue. Good luck. I'm off to read more entries.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Dan Diego, for your feedback and kind comments. I will go an edit those mistakes.
Comment from apky
Absolutely thrilling and wildly hilarious.
I sense that you can write this genre with much ease
because it feels and reads totally natural. The
dialogue all fall into place smoothly.
My only suggestion is that you format the
work so that it's double-spaced for ease on the eye
of the reader.
Good luck with the competition.
Correction:
"When was this(,) Bashful? In the morning or afternoon?"
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Absolutely thrilling and wildly hilarious.
I sense that you can write this genre with much ease
because it feels and reads totally natural. The
dialogue all fall into place smoothly.
My only suggestion is that you format the
work so that it's double-spaced for ease on the eye
of the reader.
Good luck with the competition.
Correction:
"When was this(,) Bashful? In the morning or afternoon?"
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank, apky, for your feedback and kind comments. I will correct that error.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the police interrogation after finding the missing Snow White of other suspects; nothing found serious; she was allowed to move from the interrogation room; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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This speaks about the police interrogation after finding the missing Snow White of other suspects; nothing found serious; she was allowed to move from the interrogation room; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear, for your feedback and kind comments.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much and thought that it was very well written. It was a fun read and I wish you all the best at the contest. I think that you should do very well!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much and thought that it was very well written. It was a fun read and I wish you all the best at the contest. I think that you should do very well!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Jeff Michaux, for your feedback and kind comments.
