Starry Skies
Sonnet76 total reviews
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JMF: great sonnet. It's amazing how our fingers can
change the flow of our thoughts. Sometimes, my characters
become alive and I meet them. I like your rhymes and shocker
ending. Happy New Year. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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JMF: great sonnet. It's amazing how our fingers can
change the flow of our thoughts. Sometimes, my characters
become alive and I meet them. I like your rhymes and shocker
ending. Happy New Year. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gloria ....
The tones of purples and blue, the true colour of love, are amazing in your presentation, Janet. It's amazing how the sound of someone just moving or living makes such an imprint on our memory of them. You've capture that essence beautifully.
It's amazing how sonnets sometimes take a different direction that we had originally planned.
This is a terrific sonnet and I wish you the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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The tones of purples and blue, the true colour of love, are amazing in your presentation, Janet. It's amazing how the sound of someone just moving or living makes such an imprint on our memory of them. You've capture that essence beautifully.
It's amazing how sonnets sometimes take a different direction that we had originally planned.
This is a terrific sonnet and I wish you the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you gloria for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written sonnet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written sonnet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Teri for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from zekeziemann
I like the rhyming and the deep thoughts that are related by the author of a long lost love put into rhyme and good rhythm. Happy New Year
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I like the rhyming and the deep thoughts that are related by the author of a long lost love put into rhyme and good rhythm. Happy New Year
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from mermaids
There is sadness in your words and a feeling of love that does not happen. Excellent sonnet form with a smooth flow of words. "But as the snowflakes fall and fill the air" is a great line that adds to the feeling of the poem. I wish you well for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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There is sadness in your words and a feeling of love that does not happen. Excellent sonnet form with a smooth flow of words. "But as the snowflakes fall and fill the air" is a great line that adds to the feeling of the poem. I wish you well for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Jmf4119, A heartfelt poem of memories. Of special note:
The starry skies fade slowly with the dawn
revealing beauty of a brand-new day.
I turn to see that, from my bed, you've gone
as my blue heavens change to dismal grey.
(A verse that many can/will relate to. In the beauty of the night, magic casts it spell.)
I also liked:
So, quietly, I go back to our bed
and dream again of days when we were wed.
(Soulful)
Lovely artwork choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Hello Jmf4119, A heartfelt poem of memories. Of special note:
The starry skies fade slowly with the dawn
revealing beauty of a brand-new day.
I turn to see that, from my bed, you've gone
as my blue heavens change to dismal grey.
(A verse that many can/will relate to. In the beauty of the night, magic casts it spell.)
I also liked:
So, quietly, I go back to our bed
and dream again of days when we were wed.
(Soulful)
Lovely artwork choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you LateBloomer for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes. I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Anyone who has lost in love can relate to this feeling and this writer conveyed that feeling perfectly. This was written well, the photo is a great match. She has either experienced this pain or knows someone who has been through it - that she supported as she writes of the emotion so profoundly. Very well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Anyone who has lost in love can relate to this feeling and this writer conveyed that feeling perfectly. This was written well, the photo is a great match. She has either experienced this pain or knows someone who has been through it - that she supported as she writes of the emotion so profoundly. Very well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Wendy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and those extra special shining stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one. I personally have not experienced a loss like this but I have friends who have. It can be devastating.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from zanya
It's an effective nostalgic reflection on the profound feelings of loss and the emotional longing following a relationship breakup and pain that inevitably ensues
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It's an effective nostalgic reflection on the profound feelings of loss and the emotional longing following a relationship breakup and pain that inevitably ensues
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you zanya for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and those extra special shining stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one. I personally have not experienced a loss like this but I have friends who have. It can be devastating.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow, Janet.
You sure do know how to tug at those ole heartstrings, yes?
As evidenced by my rating, I felt this was an exceptionally melancholy yet simultaneously beautifully well written sonnet.
Impeccable rhyme, meter and flow--a trifecta of perfection.
Bravo...
~Dean
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Wow, Janet.
You sure do know how to tug at those ole heartstrings, yes?
As evidenced by my rating, I felt this was an exceptionally melancholy yet simultaneously beautifully well written sonnet.
Impeccable rhyme, meter and flow--a trifecta of perfection.
Bravo...
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Dean for this exceptional review. I am honored to receive a sixth star from one who I consider to be one of the best poets on FS. Thank you for the encouragement and those special six stars.
Blessings and I hope you are doing well.
Janet
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this very sad poem. It is so poignant with a beautiful illustration and presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
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I really enjoyed reading this very sad poem. It is so poignant with a beautiful illustration and presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and those extra special shining stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one. I personally have not experienced a loss like this but I have friends who have. It can be devastating.
Blessings
Janet
