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Perennials of War

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Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan

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Comment from royowen
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Anderson escorts Shana to meet with her parents, who are just over Shabbat or the sabbath, to the gentile, the investigation of the painting is comtinuong and the mystery is deepening. They meet with Hannah and husband Paul. Well done Barbara , great scribing, blessings, HNY,Roy

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the kind review. I hope you have a Blessed New Year!!!
reply by royowen on 01-Jan-2018
    You too Barbara
Comment from c_lucas
Exceptional
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It would appear that Anderson is making plans for and Shana's future. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the kind review. I hope you have a wonderful New Year!!
reply by c_lucas on 02-Jan-2018
    You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sankey
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Great reading once again. Happy New year, by the way. Glad you are back I have missed you. Not sure you heard my carols before. I figured out how to add the MP3 files for the music. Just one spag in the author notes but not your fault it is a FS furphy.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Thank you for a kind review. Happy New Year!!!!!
Comment from Sugarray77
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A good, concise part of the chapter. The plot development is balanced. The photo is a good fit and matches your message. Regards. Hope you are enjoying a wonderful New Year's Day!

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the kind review. Happy New Year!!!!!!