A Better Me
Things to improve my character in 20187 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good contest entry you have penned about what you want to do for 2018 that may have been lacking in 2017. I can totally relate to what you are saying! Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
This is a very good contest entry you have penned about what you want to do for 2018 that may have been lacking in 2017. I can totally relate to what you are saying! Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from Liberty Justice
HEYBWOW I LOVE your resolution and my thumbs up put you in first place by yourself. I love way you admit all your faults and promise to be a better you. Dynamic title. Liberry justice
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
HEYBWOW I LOVE your resolution and my thumbs up put you in first place by yourself. I love way you admit all your faults and promise to be a better you. Dynamic title. Liberry justice
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the read and review. Sometimes one needs to be honest and admit faults in order to improve.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the New Year, New Me writing prompt.
Well done and nicely stated. Love the artwork as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
This is a good entry for the New Year, New Me writing prompt.
Well done and nicely stated. Love the artwork as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from elainec4
You relay a great message and a specific plan for becoming a better you. This specific recipe will probably encourage your readers to give some thought to their own new start. Look back at your first line and see if you need an "ed" on relax. Happy New Year! Thanks for sharing. elaine
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
You relay a great message and a specific plan for becoming a better you. This specific recipe will probably encourage your readers to give some thought to their own new start. Look back at your first line and see if you need an "ed" on relax. Happy New Year! Thanks for sharing. elaine
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the read and for the suggestion.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how you wish to make the New Year 2018 and resolve to become a much better person, no fake news, no wine, take prayer and exercise regularly; I liked. DR ALCREATOR Happy New Year 2018
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
This speaks how you wish to make the New Year 2018 and resolve to become a much better person, no fake news, no wine, take prayer and exercise regularly; I liked. DR ALCREATOR Happy New Year 2018
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thanks for the review. Happy New Year.
Comment from c_lucas
Physical life should blend with Spiritual life in order to have a better daily life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
Physical life should blend with Spiritual life in order to have a better daily life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review. Happy New Year.
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem. This is the time of year we try to change ourselves, I have a few ideas for myself. Thanks for sharing this great poem and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
Nice poem. This is the time of year we try to change ourselves, I have a few ideas for myself. Thanks for sharing this great poem and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review. Happy New Year.