Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Flower writing prompt.
Well written, and I love the picture that you have posted with it.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I really like this. Great choice of words. A good description and choice of topic. The photo was good and fit the scenario well. Good job. Regards. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from MSJVClarke

Excellent

This is a lovely poem about a truly lovely flower. Your syllable count meets the criteria and words served your flower well. It's a truly beautiful piece of work showing your poetic ability.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for critique zanya