A Point Of View From The Zoo
Discussing my body4 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your writing from the point of view of the gorilla. Your punchline was unexpected and effective, along with your rhymes. Best wishes in the contest and happy New Year- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I admired your writing from the point of view of the gorilla. Your punchline was unexpected and effective, along with your rhymes. Best wishes in the contest and happy New Year- Joan
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your appreciative review, Joan.
Don
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a cute poem for the 'Your Body' writing prompt.
Well done. Your story was clear and well told. The picture is cute too.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This is a cute poem for the 'Your Body' writing prompt.
Well done. Your story was clear and well told. The picture is cute too.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your complimentary review, Sharon. The old guy in the picture would be very flattered by your comment about him. (You do have an interesting taste in men.)
Happy New Year!
Don
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As a man, not so cute. As an ape, definitely.
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I'm glad to hear that, Sharon. He'd still be flattered, and your man, relieved.
Comment from smudge
It made me smile. The ageing ape in the zoo, regretting aging like me and you. Deprived of all the perks of youth. So sad, unfortunately the truth.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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It made me smile. The ageing ape in the zoo, regretting aging like me and you. Deprived of all the perks of youth. So sad, unfortunately the truth.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your insightful comments, Smudge.
Keep smiling!
Comment from Sherman541
I like the story of the Ape/Gorilla. The Zoo is a great place to see many things that many people do not notice. It is true that once we all looked beautiful. Alas, it is also true we all get old, but with age comes wisdom and even with our wrinkles we are not ugly, just a bit older than the day before. I like the comparisons, they are so very human like. Good Job ! Good Luck and Best Wishes in the contest. Sherman541
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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I like the story of the Ape/Gorilla. The Zoo is a great place to see many things that many people do not notice. It is true that once we all looked beautiful. Alas, it is also true we all get old, but with age comes wisdom and even with our wrinkles we are not ugly, just a bit older than the day before. I like the comparisons, they are so very human like. Good Job ! Good Luck and Best Wishes in the contest. Sherman541
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your insightful comments, Sherman.
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