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An unlikely story, and yet...
3 total reviews
Comment from
Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'Write a Modern Fable' writing prompt.
Well told, funny but not funny, well done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
Comment from
Sugarray77
Your imagination is in full form and shows in this poem. I must say I struggled with the number of large words and had to stop and figure them out to proceed. Not a smooth read for me. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from
Poetic Friend
Mmmh, I wonder who is this man-child? Wow, is that a photograph of the President?
Well, children learn from their environment and upbringing. Oftentimes what we lack as children, we seek as an adults. Your story addresses this issue quite well.
Good luck in the contest with this entry. It is going to be challenging to beat.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
Thank you for your excellent, insightful, and most encouraging comments, PF!
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