What I Feel
I modeled this poem from a haiku sonnet.3 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I respect this write a lot. I think it totally sucks that most of us didn't enjoy these moments while we had them. The stupidity of youth, I suppose, but when we need them most all we get left are tossed memories. This one is an incredible write. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
I respect this write a lot. I think it totally sucks that most of us didn't enjoy these moments while we had them. The stupidity of youth, I suppose, but when we need them most all we get left are tossed memories. This one is an incredible write. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you, kiwigirl2821, for your feedback and kind comments. I'm so glad you respected my poem. I enjoyed writing it so much because so much of my emotions went into it. Thank you again.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a fine entry for the 'Passionate Love in Black and White' writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
This is a fine entry for the 'Passionate Love in Black and White' writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Sharon, thank you for your kind comments and feedback. Also, thank you for your good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a passionate love in dimensions and it memorizes how sweet and romantic moments they passed and now lover feels love so keen; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
This speaks a passionate love in dimensions and it memorizes how sweet and romantic moments they passed and now lover feels love so keen; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your feedback and kind comments, Alcreator Litt Dear. I'm glad you enjoyed it.