Malala
A Sedoka3 total reviews
Comment from Lucian Carter
A very strong poem. This is both well written and well argued. Your picture is more specific than I think your message is, but it works as an example. You have the syllables correct. It's not necessary for the two stanzas to argue two sides in this contest; so I think you hit the rules dead on. Good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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A very strong poem. This is both well written and well argued. Your picture is more specific than I think your message is, but it works as an example. You have the syllables correct. It's not necessary for the two stanzas to argue two sides in this contest; so I think you hit the rules dead on. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Hello lucian, I appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much and a very Merry Christmas to you.
Comment from zanya
A moving tribute here in this Sedoka to an extremely brave young woman who by her actions is attempting to make the world a better place to live ..despite the horror she has personally experienced
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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A moving tribute here in this Sedoka to an extremely brave young woman who by her actions is attempting to make the world a better place to live ..despite the horror she has personally experienced
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello zanya, I appreciate your time and thank you very much for the wonderful review. Happy holidays.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent work, and what a great young person to honor. She has been a shining example for others on her young life. Great idea for your contrasting stanzas. You show Malala's spark of courage, even in the midst of intolerance. Your second stanza reflects the hate that she has been strong enough to confront, Very powerful words and perfect syllable count. Couldn't be better! Best of luck, and Merry Christmas. judi
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Excellent work, and what a great young person to honor. She has been a shining example for others on her young life. Great idea for your contrasting stanzas. You show Malala's spark of courage, even in the midst of intolerance. Your second stanza reflects the hate that she has been strong enough to confront, Very powerful words and perfect syllable count. Couldn't be better! Best of luck, and Merry Christmas. judi
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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So glad you stopped by my friend, appreciate your time and the starry review, thank you very much and happy holidays.
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You're very welcome. judi
