Secret Love
First kiss4 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Passionate Love In Black and White writing prompt.
Your poem is well written and the picture is a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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This is a good entry for the Passionate Love In Black and White writing prompt.
Your poem is well written and the picture is a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the read and your comments.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
The issues are surely stronger than the bliss? I understand this as I've lived 38 years with the same man and only very recently through a strange set of circumstances have change completely my life. The draw and allure of a moment of feeling like someone finds me more than my hum drum normal life is near impossible to ignore. This is a wonderful entry into this contest. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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The issues are surely stronger than the bliss? I understand this as I've lived 38 years with the same man and only very recently through a strange set of circumstances have change completely my life. The draw and allure of a moment of feeling like someone finds me more than my hum drum normal life is near impossible to ignore. This is a wonderful entry into this contest. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you Kiwigirl. My hope is that all goes well for you.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This poem accurately conveys the excitement of forbidden love as well as the anticipation of what it might develop into. I like the rhyme scheme and love the photo you chose to go with it. Best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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This poem accurately conveys the excitement of forbidden love as well as the anticipation of what it might develop into. I like the rhyme scheme and love the photo you chose to go with it. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from c_lucas
In young years, I have stolen many a kiss. A few slaps resulted but most were returned with passionate interests. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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In young years, I have stolen many a kiss. A few slaps resulted but most were returned with passionate interests. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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You have given up stolen kisses? Well, I guess so have I. Now fantasy has taken over. Thanks for the read and the comments..
