Brief Respite
A Sedoka8 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Great choice of words and a good description and choice of topic. The contrast was good and fit the scenario well. Good job. Regards. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Great choice of words and a good description and choice of topic. The contrast was good and fit the scenario well. Good job. Regards. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your kind consideration.
Comment from jenintorre
What a beautiful Sedoka poem entry. A vivid description of a tranquil scene enhanced by the lovely illustration. I wish you good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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What a beautiful Sedoka poem entry. A vivid description of a tranquil scene enhanced by the lovely illustration. I wish you good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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thank you for your kind comments!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the sandy beach gets a temporary rest or relief after the summer and in winter when the birds do migrate to the pink sand beach; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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This speaks the sandy beach gets a temporary rest or relief after the summer and in winter when the birds do migrate to the pink sand beach; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a serene quality to your words here and he pink beach and pink sun comes through the page and fills me with warmth, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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There is a serene quality to your words here and he pink beach and pink sun comes through the page and fills me with warmth, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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So glad you enjoyed this peaceful moment! Thanks for stopping by to read and review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A. Very well-written Sedoka. After the rush of the holiday makers. The local people enjoy the silent and desolated beach in peace.
Merry Christmas to you and your family
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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A. Very well-written Sedoka. After the rush of the holiday makers. The local people enjoy the silent and desolated beach in peace.
Merry Christmas to you and your family
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Peace is what we all want - even in small doses. We take what we can get! Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Sedoka Poem writing prompt.
And your beautiful picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the Sedoka Poem writing prompt.
And your beautiful picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
An interesting reflection here in this Sedoka on seasonal change from ' summer tourists' and the return of 'winter snowbirds' - a nice juxtaposition of 'sun's pink rays' and 'pink sand beach' beautiful art
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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An interesting reflection here in this Sedoka on seasonal change from ' summer tourists' and the return of 'winter snowbirds' - a nice juxtaposition of 'sun's pink rays' and 'pink sand beach' beautiful art
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comments and exceptional rating!
Comment from Ferkit
Nice poem. Makes me want to visit the beach. Very descriptive. I can see the empty peaceful pink beaches after the summer tourists have left. I can feel the sun's rays on my shoulders.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Nice poem. Makes me want to visit the beach. Very descriptive. I can see the empty peaceful pink beaches after the summer tourists have left. I can feel the sun's rays on my shoulders.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review!
