Hot Coffee
A Need for Speed18 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend. Hope your move to hot coffee does not land you in trouble. A coffee is as good as tea. I do not really mind. But I like the twists and the witty way of putting the writing, the short sentences and the sudden left or right turns are very good indeed.
Danny Jock
Merry Xmas
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Hi friend. Hope your move to hot coffee does not land you in trouble. A coffee is as good as tea. I do not really mind. But I like the twists and the witty way of putting the writing, the short sentences and the sudden left or right turns are very good indeed.
Danny Jock
Merry Xmas
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from JennaG
Great work! I really wish I liked coffee. It always smells good to me and all the different flavors and varieties intrigue me. But, I'm just a cold beverage Pepsi kind of girl, I guess. :) I especially liked the rhyming in your poem and the short, quick lines. It made for a fun read. Very creative and cleverly written. Well done! :)
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Great work! I really wish I liked coffee. It always smells good to me and all the different flavors and varieties intrigue me. But, I'm just a cold beverage Pepsi kind of girl, I guess. :) I especially liked the rhyming in your poem and the short, quick lines. It made for a fun read. Very creative and cleverly written. Well done! :)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
Comment from estory
The fragmented style of the language here seemed to add up to an abstract Picasso like portrait of coffee. We seem to see that cup of coffee in bits and pieces, a sense of levitation, as the caffeine works its magic and lifts us into those higher gears necessary for rumination. The words seem to dance around the image, they are quite musical, and that makes for a good poem. estory
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The fragmented style of the language here seemed to add up to an abstract Picasso like portrait of coffee. We seem to see that cup of coffee in bits and pieces, a sense of levitation, as the caffeine works its magic and lifts us into those higher gears necessary for rumination. The words seem to dance around the image, they are quite musical, and that makes for a good poem. estory
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is well-written for the coffee drinkers. This poem makes the non-coffee drinkers, like me, crave coffee. It would be a great write for a coffee commercial.
The last stanza made me smiled because I am a tea drinker.
Good luck in the contest.
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This is well-written for the coffee drinkers. This poem makes the non-coffee drinkers, like me, crave coffee. It would be a great write for a coffee commercial.
The last stanza made me smiled because I am a tea drinker.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Need for speed, coffee is more than passion.
I liked the conviction portrayed in words.
I enjoyed the wish and shades of feeling.
Truths retain.
DR ALCREATOR
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Need for speed, coffee is more than passion.
I liked the conviction portrayed in words.
I enjoyed the wish and shades of feeling.
Truths retain.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Coffee is so much better than tea, specially in the mornings. Tea is okay but not something I want to drink right away in the morning. There is just nothing better than coffee.
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Coffee is so much better than tea, specially in the mornings. Tea is okay but not something I want to drink right away in the morning. There is just nothing better than coffee.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
Comment from emptypage
Ahh.... sad. Just kidding!
It is possible, of course, to love iced tea AND coffee at the same time (though not mixed, though I'm certain SOMEONE likes mixing the two. Ew.).
I can feel the burn. That's my second biggest issue with the coffee--my tongue has lost more taste buds over that heat....
Great rhythm. Great rhymes.
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Ahh.... sad. Just kidding!
It is possible, of course, to love iced tea AND coffee at the same time (though not mixed, though I'm certain SOMEONE likes mixing the two. Ew.).
I can feel the burn. That's my second biggest issue with the coffee--my tongue has lost more taste buds over that heat....
Great rhythm. Great rhymes.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Is it so bad? I think iced coffee okay BUT only if heavily flavored. Maybe you have just not savored the perfect flavor. All the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
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Is it so bad? I think iced coffee okay BUT only if heavily flavored. Maybe you have just not savored the perfect flavor. All the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Why try to
wake up
those past things best
forgotten now
for I detest
my wish to
pretend
my need to be
someone who likes
and drinks iced tea.
I loved this poem about coffee, it's effects of you and your joke at the end..it's very funny...good uck in this competition kindest regards Meia xx
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Why try to
wake up
those past things best
forgotten now
for I detest
my wish to
pretend
my need to be
someone who likes
and drinks iced tea.
I loved this poem about coffee, it's effects of you and your joke at the end..it's very funny...good uck in this competition kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
Comment from Mark Valentine
I think like many, I started out avoiding coffee, then, after children came and kept me up in the middle of the night, I took to it, but regarded it as a necessary evil, and eventually came around to loving it. Your poem seems to capture that arc. I particularly like the enjambment that links the past tow stanzas anddoes away with the pretense of not liking coffee.
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I think like many, I started out avoiding coffee, then, after children came and kept me up in the middle of the night, I took to it, but regarded it as a necessary evil, and eventually came around to loving it. Your poem seems to capture that arc. I particularly like the enjambment that links the past tow stanzas anddoes away with the pretense of not liking coffee.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
