The alphabet by words
An Abecdarian Poem15 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Twenty six letters mixed and stirred will fill a dictionary with words. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. |Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Twenty six letters mixed and stirred will fill a dictionary with words. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. |Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ummmm, this really didn't work for me at all, Anonymous Poet.
It has no consistency and is nearly incoherent.
Of course, that's only my opinion.
Just know I rarely give anything less than a five.
But, in this case...
My only suggestion is to try and make it read a little more fluidly.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Ummmm, this really didn't work for me at all, Anonymous Poet.
It has no consistency and is nearly incoherent.
Of course, that's only my opinion.
Just know I rarely give anything less than a five.
But, in this case...
My only suggestion is to try and make it read a little more fluidly.
Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Qota (Quota) are (is) given how much you cost
I will get an assasin (assassin) to murder one.
Xerotic mongrol (Did you mean mongrel or Mongol?) that you are
You are old and passed(past) it.
I found this disjointed, no connection line to line, and the punctuation is all over the place. Not up to competition standard at this point I would say go over it with a fine tooth comb rather than saying it's to do with the site software.
Nobody knows you or me(why the space?)
Under, over ,sideways , and just all over the place (unneeded gap after sideways and the one after over should come directly after the word.) Fitting in words from the alphabet are just one part of an Abecdarian Poem. It is still a poem not random sentences so I can only give a four kind regards Meia.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Qota (Quota) are (is) given how much you cost
I will get an assasin (assassin) to murder one.
Xerotic mongrol (Did you mean mongrel or Mongol?) that you are
You are old and passed(past) it.
I found this disjointed, no connection line to line, and the punctuation is all over the place. Not up to competition standard at this point I would say go over it with a fine tooth comb rather than saying it's to do with the site software.
Nobody knows you or me(why the space?)
Under, over ,sideways , and just all over the place (unneeded gap after sideways and the one after over should come directly after the word.) Fitting in words from the alphabet are just one part of an Abecdarian Poem. It is still a poem not random sentences so I can only give a four kind regards Meia.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Nicely done abecedarian poem, my friend. These are not so easy to do. You did a terrific job with it. Good luck. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Nicely done abecedarian poem, my friend. These are not so easy to do. You did a terrific job with it. Good luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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thanks for your nice review, Ine. have a lovely weekend.
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You're very welcome.
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You're very welcome:))
Comment from Pantygynt
Too often thes things descend into a list of disconnected statements, as does this one. I reviewed one earlier today that told a story in a poetic way and was written with rhymes into the bargain. This has a long way to go to equal that.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Too often thes things descend into a list of disconnected statements, as does this one. I reviewed one earlier today that told a story in a poetic way and was written with rhymes into the bargain. This has a long way to go to equal that.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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thanks for your nice review, Ine. have a lovely weekend.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A good effort, but I am afraid this is not and abecedarian poem, The alphabet is not shown in a chronical order and I am missing the letter 'M' and 'P' there are many typos as well.
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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A good effort, but I am afraid this is not and abecedarian poem, The alphabet is not shown in a chronical order and I am missing the letter 'M' and 'P' there are many typos as well.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Ine. I will change
Comment from twotock
Nice! I like it, jolly in is mocking threats. Your first line justifies that and sets the reader up to enjoy the poem. Good one and good luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Nice! I like it, jolly in is mocking threats. Your first line justifies that and sets the reader up to enjoy the poem. Good one and good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week-weekend near.
Comment from sunnilicious
Hi Ina! You're missing letters K to P... However, it came out great so far. Good luck finishing up before the contest deadline. You're funny. Hope all is going great! Hearts & hugs :)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Hi Ina! You're missing letters K to P... However, it came out great so far. Good luck finishing up before the contest deadline. You're funny. Hope all is going great! Hearts & hugs :)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week-weekend near.
Comment from kahpot
Yes I can see where you are headed with these great words, "if I may" the line starting with "t" you have peole think this should be people, I enjoyed this, very well done****kahpt
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Yes I can see where you are headed with these great words, "if I may" the line starting with "t" you have peole think this should be people, I enjoyed this, very well done****kahpt
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week-weekend near.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This certainly meets the requirements of the form as you have used every letter and even abused a couple LOL. I enjoyed this as this particular form of poetry does iften come across rather stilted or downright silly. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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This certainly meets the requirements of the form as you have used every letter and even abused a couple LOL. I enjoyed this as this particular form of poetry does iften come across rather stilted or downright silly. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week-weekend near.
