All writers lunch together, not me.
A short story about me being a writer11 total reviews
Comment from Dan Diego
It is strange how the story between our ears gets distorted by our pens (or keyboards). I wonder what little gremlins reside in us that make us miss a comma or misspell a word we've written a million times? Who knows? I do know that most writers at the lunch table suffer the same as the rest.
The strength of this submission is its honesty. You share your thoughts against the metaphor of lunch with other writers. Clever.
I saw a few punctuation errors but they did not get in the way of the honest narrative.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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It is strange how the story between our ears gets distorted by our pens (or keyboards). I wonder what little gremlins reside in us that make us miss a comma or misspell a word we've written a million times? Who knows? I do know that most writers at the lunch table suffer the same as the rest.
The strength of this submission is its honesty. You share your thoughts against the metaphor of lunch with other writers. Clever.
I saw a few punctuation errors but they did not get in the way of the honest narrative.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend,
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this short story. I admire the fact that you are so honest and so . Best wishes Jen.humble. I wish you lots of luck in the competition
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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I really enjoyed reading this short story. I admire the fact that you are so honest and so . Best wishes Jen.humble. I wish you lots of luck in the competition
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from zekeziemann
I am trying to figure out where I fit into this story. I don't think I do. I am like you and do not attend the lunch! Well written and entertaining. A bit puzzling but I think that was your objective.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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I am trying to figure out where I fit into this story. I don't think I do. I am like you and do not attend the lunch! Well written and entertaining. A bit puzzling but I think that was your objective.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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thanks for your nice review, Ine. have a lovely weekend.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is an interesting writing for the 'Writing' writing prompt.
The picture is wild and a very good match.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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This is an interesting writing for the 'Writing' writing prompt.
The picture is wild and a very good match.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review. Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. It does make sense to focus on one category more than another since recognition here costs money and the more you pay out the more likely you are to rise regardless of writing skills. I hope you get your wish and win the prompt but one thing history has proven here is points and cents will garner reviews not necessarily votes. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. It does make sense to focus on one category more than another since recognition here costs money and the more you pay out the more likely you are to rise regardless of writing skills. I hope you get your wish and win the prompt but one thing history has proven here is points and cents will garner reviews not necessarily votes. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week-weekend is nearby.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I miss Brooke too. She was and is one of the most gracious women and friends I ever had. this story meets the criteria and is a good entry. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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I miss Brooke too. She was and is one of the most gracious women and friends I ever had. this story meets the criteria and is a good entry. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week-nearly weekend.
Comment from sunnilicious
It is good to keep busy. Writing creatively is good for the mind like eating berries and nuts. Stories or poetry... it's all good. I liked your artwork choice. Do you know any male shrinks seeking a love relationship?
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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It is good to keep busy. Writing creatively is good for the mind like eating berries and nuts. Stories or poetry... it's all good. I liked your artwork choice. Do you know any male shrinks seeking a love relationship?
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week-weekend near.
Comment from Wetbelly01
This is a very good read..... Well presented,
I can tell you miss your teacher and friend....
Wouldn't have you change a thing!... Well done,
and may the best person win!!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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This is a very good read..... Well presented,
I can tell you miss your teacher and friend....
Wouldn't have you change a thing!... Well done,
and may the best person win!!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
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You're most Welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Never give up on your dreams and if you want to write, go ahead and take whatever criticism there is and learn from it, but never stop doing what is in your heart. You opened up your heart in your writing, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Never give up on your dreams and if you want to write, go ahead and take whatever criticism there is and learn from it, but never stop doing what is in your heart. You opened up your heart in your writing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks author did not but all the writers enjoyed their lunch for he had prejudices that his poetry was not so readable in public and he does not gossip; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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This speaks author did not but all the writers enjoyed their lunch for he had prejudices that his poetry was not so readable in public and he does not gossip; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week
