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My voice33 total reviews
Comment from Brigitte Elko
Very well written One Line Poem. It is difficult to tell a story with such few words, you managed this well. The picture you chose is perfect for your words.
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Brigitte
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Very well written One Line Poem. It is difficult to tell a story with such few words, you managed this well. The picture you chose is perfect for your words.
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Brigitte
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This cute little piece is a strong entry for the contest as it can be taken so many different ways. Literally, figuratively, and metaphorically. Very very well done
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This cute little piece is a strong entry for the contest as it can be taken so many different ways. Literally, figuratively, and metaphorically. Very very well done
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
What a great one-liner! It's true that most people enter the world screaming but some continue all their lives. The having "no voice" has two meanings both physical and emotional as others could be deaf to the poet. But with poems, he still has a voice!
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What a great one-liner! It's true that most people enter the world screaming but some continue all their lives. The having "no voice" has two meanings both physical and emotional as others could be deaf to the poet. But with poems, he still has a voice!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you, and again very well read, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very clever and deep at the same time. The person without a voice could be applied to a multitude of circumstances. I wish I had a six left. There have been so many good posts that I ran out.
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Very clever and deep at the same time. The person without a voice could be applied to a multitude of circumstances. I wish I had a six left. There have been so many good posts that I ran out.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your encouragement more than six****kahpot
Comment from wordsmithbully
ð???Creative!! Love it!! Nice one liner! Inspires me to sit and try to create a one liner!! I am a micro poetry writer anyhow and so it should not be too bad. Thanks for the share!
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ð???Creative!! Love it!! Nice one liner! Inspires me to sit and try to create a one liner!! I am a micro poetry writer anyhow and so it should not be too bad. Thanks for the share!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, as I am still learning different forms, could you explain "micro poet" many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
It would be nice if the people in charge now, would listen to their PEOPLE, and give our voice back' Absolutely I agree, a wonderful one line poem very impressive including artwork which frames it perfectly. kindest regards my fried, Meia x
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It would be nice if the people in charge now, would listen to their PEOPLE, and give our voice back' Absolutely I agree, a wonderful one line poem very impressive including artwork which frames it perfectly. kindest regards my fried, Meia x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, and more for understanding****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the One Line Poetry contest.
The picture is lovely and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the One Line Poetry contest.
The picture is lovely and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a pathetic and deplorable story about the poet himself; he was born screaming, truly indeed but now he does not keep voice has been taken; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks a pathetic and deplorable story about the poet himself; he was born screaming, truly indeed but now he does not keep voice has been taken; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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you must have a big hammer, as you hit the nail "author" right on the head****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love these few words that say so much! But you do have a voice and you use your vote to make choices and hope that all those around have like minded voices, but alas the democratic vote means that the majority have the voice and the minority remain silent, poignant words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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I love these few words that say so much! But you do have a voice and you use your vote to make choices and hope that all those around have like minded voices, but alas the democratic vote means that the majority have the voice and the minority remain silent, poignant words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, I guess I would just like my voice to be louder****kahpot
Comment from Neonewman
Quite a compelling short one liner you have delivered for this particular contest my friend. Our voices are being stifled everyday and the evil that is continues to march forward.
God bless1
Steve
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Quite a compelling short one liner you have delivered for this particular contest my friend. Our voices are being stifled everyday and the evil that is continues to march forward.
God bless1
Steve
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes evil needs to be stopped****kahpot
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My pleasure!
