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My voice33 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hmmmm ... interesting concept for a one line poem, kahpot.
We ALL come into the world kicking and screaming, I think. But not all of us lose our individual voices.
Unless, of course, you're speaking about politics.
Which you seem to be in this.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Hmmmm ... interesting concept for a one line poem, kahpot.
We ALL come into the world kicking and screaming, I think. But not all of us lose our individual voices.
Unless, of course, you're speaking about politics.
Which you seem to be in this.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thank you and yes it is meant to be about politics, I should have made the title different****kahpot
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Oh well.
Live and learn I always say.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a very nice one line poem. It makes a very strong statement that relates to its title and the artwork certainly enhances the message in your words as it relates to our needs to be heard.
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This is a very nice one line poem. It makes a very strong statement that relates to its title and the artwork certainly enhances the message in your words as it relates to our needs to be heard.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent thought provoking piece. It seems to have many layers and meanings depending on how you take it. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
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An excellent thought provoking piece. It seems to have many layers and meanings depending on how you take it. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from Knighteagle
Well written, could be taken in two different ways. Hoarse from screaming, or lost in the masses voiceless. Good thought provoking piece. Good contest entry, best of luck.
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Well written, could be taken in two different ways. Hoarse from screaming, or lost in the masses voiceless. Good thought provoking piece. Good contest entry, best of luck.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem. In this life it seems there are only some people who may have an opinion or may say what they want. Others are just puppets that have no rights.
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A very well-written one-line poem. In this life it seems there are only some people who may have an opinion or may say what they want. Others are just puppets that have no rights.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very strong and powerful one line poem you penned. I love the artwork as well. Nice job! Good luck! ~Kerry
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This is a very strong and powerful one line poem you penned. I love the artwork as well. Nice job! Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You're very welcome, Have a great day!
Comment from zekeziemann
As they say, the picture is worth a thousand words or in this case just a few words. Well done and thought out. Merry Christmas.
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As they say, the picture is worth a thousand words or in this case just a few words. Well done and thought out. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Pantygynt
These tiny poems are alwayts difficult things to get to stand alone. Thios works very well but it does draw heavily on the illustration for the depth of its impact, but it is a very good effort at a one liner.
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These tiny poems are alwayts difficult things to get to stand alone. Thios works very well but it does draw heavily on the illustration for the depth of its impact, but it is a very good effort at a one liner.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from twotock
Nice. Short and punchy as needs must. A nice play on life, throughout the ages! Seems nothing seems to change. A nice entry for the competition, good luck
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Nice. Short and punchy as needs must. A nice play on life, throughout the ages! Seems nothing seems to change. A nice entry for the competition, good luck
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from c_lucas
Screams at birth are meant to clear the airways. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
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Screams at birth are meant to clear the airways. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
