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Deer Danger

Deer family hears noise that means danger

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Comment from MSJVClarke
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This is a good poem. I liked the topic of deer. The syllable count appears correct to me. Your words intermingle together to fit the criteria and it tells a very true story of animal nature, indeed.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the read and the kind review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This poem is a good entry for the animal haiku writing prompt.
The picture is lovely and is a good match for your poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the read and the review.