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Themes - The Backbone of Good Lyrics

Finding inspiration for your lyrics

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Comment from MizKat
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Hi Brett,

I don't post poetry very much now.
I am not good at writing them anymore.
The older that I get the less I write anything.
Instead I will read what others continue to write.

Kat

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
    Always good to hear from you.

    Keep writing, even if only for your own enjoyment.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
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I DON'T SEE THE TOOL BAR I DON'T
KNOW HOW TO JOIN. I'M NOT ALL THAT GOOD
WITH MY NEW COMPUTER I NEED A LITTLE GUIDENCE

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
    1. To the left of where you see when you get a new review, you should see the word Community. Click on that word.

    2. A list will drop down. The third item on that list is Clubs. Click on that word.

    3. The page for the clubs will open. The Lyrics Make The Song Club is on top of that list.. Click on that club and it will open up for you. That is where you join us.

    Hopefully this helps. If not, let me know.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Good morning, Brett: No, I still have not joined this group as i still have not started to write any music. I saw at the beginning of this post that you mentioned:

I know my postings may not appeal to the widest number of FanStorians. I am not concerned about that. I have come to realize on this site it is much better to post for like-minded members, and that is what I now do.

Well, I decided to read this post anyway, because anything that you write it is still interesting enough for a good read. I was correct in deciding to read it because even if I am not interested at this time in writing music, you have still taught me something about writing music. This way when I do decide to do so, I can reflect on what I have learned from you today, in this post. You have a way of encouraging others also in whatever you write so these posts do benefit whoever reads them. Thank you for sharing this information.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this posting.

    I very much believe instead of trying to please all members of this site with my writing, I am better served to remain within the niche I have been classified by most of them into, and that is a lyricist and short story writer, particularly about Cody Schroder. I am contented with this.

    I do appreciate you taking the time to read my posts. Your reviews are always so insightful and helpful.

    I do invite you to join the club, if only to read information about lyric writing.
reply by Asem.inspirations on 07-Dec-2017
    That's terrific, thank you for the offer. I may surprise you soon.
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was very interesting and creative information to help people learn to write songs and lyrics of the songs if they have never done so that's not a problem for me and I don't have a problem coming up with the lyrics As I have the gift the problem is getting them out to the right places where you can make a few bucks so very well done thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024 and have a nice night

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    So, why not join the club and share some of them? That is one reason for the club with other members?

    Glad you enjoyed this posting.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from Sankey
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Well done mate. Does it matter if I share my carols in here or my other songs that may have been already posted with my poems etc in FS? FS is getting picky and wanting more, more more, in reviews sigh!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Share away. Sure club members would enjoy them.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read this posting and to write a review.
reply by Sankey on 07-Dec-2017
    I need to work on the MP3 files for the music hope I can post MP3 links.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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hello Brett. I like the idea of songwriting. I think one of the reasons I started and stay with free style writing is because I wanted to learn how to write songs. I'm not so musically inclined however, only that I love music and listen non stop. Prefer it to TV any day! I always thought a good way to start writing would be to take a song already out there and follow the syllable count and measure. I enjoyed the article. See you round. :) deborah

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this porting.

    If you are not a club member, I invite you to become one.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read this posting and to write a review.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I dabbled in lyrics a few times and I know I did not do them justice as I did not understand the fine line between lyrics and poems. Very informative

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this posting.

    The difference between lyrics and poems. A very good question that perhaps the club may address.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read this post and to write a review.

    If you are not a member, I invite you to join us.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written article and advice on how to find a theme an writing lyrics about what you like to say or the message you like to convey to the audience.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this posting.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from rama devi
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Excellent share. Insightful. Delivered with a simple, gracious voicing. I am sure prospective lyricists will find it useful. Favorite line:

While lyricists may desire to write about themselves, from a very self-oriented point of view, they will be much better served to think outside the box.

However, using outside the box is a bit cliche - if you can conjure a fresh metaphor that means the same thing, that would be ideal.


Two spags:

But,(no ,) no downloaded songs belonging to anyone other than the member who downloaded the song are allowed.


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So, the next time you want to write a new lyric(,) try placing yourself in the shoes of a character in a movie or a news story.


Overall, well paced and well delivered.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this posting.

    As always, insightful review.

    Appreciate the nits and you taking the time to pen this review.
reply by rama devi on 07-Dec-2017
    :-)))
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Thank you for this well written article. I found it informative because I am definitely interested in writing lyrics. Actually, I would like to convert my existing poetry into lyrics (if that's all possible). This article guides me to become a lyricist.

Thank you for sharing it with us. You are very thoughtful.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this posting.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read and to write a review.

    Feel free to share your lyrics with the club.