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Guided by the prompt.: Subject is based on human nature.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet;
Yes, men definitely need to change their point of view. There is nothing more disconcerting than trying to hold a conversation with someone when their eyes are looking at your chest rather than your eyes,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
Don't forget what they SAY about it. Thank you for your very welcome comments, Patty.
Comment from
giraffmang
Hi there,
I got a nice sense of the physical nature of this piece. Changing the point of the point of view in terms of eye-line and banter. Clever and fun piece.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
It's very rewarding when someone else 'gets' one's point of view. Thanks for what you said, GMG!
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