Silent Scream
This is a true story and proclaims my faith in God.36 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
I have experienced the conversation of the surgeon and staff while being out. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
I have experienced the conversation of the surgeon and staff while being out. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. This is a day I will never forget.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Dan Diego
When I started my review, I wrote down several punctuation and spacing errors. But then I see that you selected the category of non-fiction biography. I quickly realized that sometimes the message is more important than the methods we choose to convey it. So, no nitpicks in this review. You have new life.
This is the first contest entry that our narrator asks the required question of God. And most of us can relate to the lament though with much less to lose. I suspect the narrator is you, or a close friend. Our gain.
Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
When I started my review, I wrote down several punctuation and spacing errors. But then I see that you selected the category of non-fiction biography. I quickly realized that sometimes the message is more important than the methods we choose to convey it. So, no nitpicks in this review. You have new life.
This is the first contest entry that our narrator asks the required question of God. And most of us can relate to the lament though with much less to lose. I suspect the narrator is you, or a close friend. Our gain.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thank you for this close read. Your comments are helpful for future narrations.
Nitpicks are great if they help improve the submission.
The narrator is in this event is yours truly, thank you for the kind "Our gain."
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from BeasPeas
Stories like these are amazing. I'm glad you are alright now. A similar thing happened when my housemate was in surgery. It wasn't his time. A well composed piece that offers a glimpse to the other side. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
Stories like these are amazing. I'm glad you are alright now. A similar thing happened when my housemate was in surgery. It wasn't his time. A well composed piece that offers a glimpse to the other side. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. It was a day to remember.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from zekeziemann
Wonderful story of faith in an Almighty God whose times and ways are not necessarily ours. He apparently has more for you to do. Well done. Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
Wonderful story of faith in an Almighty God whose times and ways are not necessarily ours. He apparently has more for you to do. Well done. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. Your kind words will keep me writing.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt story. It is a miracle that God brought you back to be with your family for much longer. The simplest procedure can go wrong and we can die at the hands of professionals if God doesn't step in.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
A very well-written heartfelt story. It is a miracle that God brought you back to be with your family for much longer. The simplest procedure can go wrong and we can die at the hands of professionals if God doesn't step in.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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God definitely stepped and guided the doctors' hands. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent write, and yes Faith is on our side if we believe and I do hear that loud and clear, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
What an excellent write, and yes Faith is on our side if we believe and I do hear that loud and clear, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and the supportive review.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from LIJ Red
A well-told frightening story, words heard most often in battlefield hospitals.
The Lord and your doctor were on the ball, I wager. Excellent story for the prompt.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
A well-told frightening story, words heard most often in battlefield hospitals.
The Lord and your doctor were on the ball, I wager. Excellent story for the prompt.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your supportive comments.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Thomas Bowling
God was good to you. I'm glad to hear your story of faith. It's comforting and I'm sure that many will be strengthened by it. I hope you had a full recovery.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
God was good to you. I'm glad to hear your story of faith. It's comforting and I'm sure that many will be strengthened by it. I hope you had a full recovery.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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I did recover fully and my faith was reaffirmed. Thank you for reading and your kind comments.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from dragonpoet
Very concise story of faith. It tells us prayers are answered. I bet the doctor's didn't know they could be heard when a patient is under. Maybe other's have had similar experiences.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
Very concise story of faith. It tells us prayers are answered. I bet the doctor's didn't know they could be heard when a patient is under. Maybe other's have had similar experiences.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays
Joan
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Your supportive comments are indeed an incentive to keep writing. Thank you for your review and comments.
Happy Holidays,
Brigiitte
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No problem, Brigitte.
Joan
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello BRIGITTE ELKO: First of all, my friend: Thank you for the review nomination. I needed that. But I need more friends like you much, even more. Brigitte, I cannot express to you in words just how glad I am that I've met you, dear lady friend. I like you, Brigitte. But you first liked me.That's how our God has blessed me. With you as a sister in our Lord, Jesus Christ. I am truly blessed. "Thank You, Jesus, for sending me, Brigitte. She will be my friend forever. Thank you for loving me, lady Brigitte. I love U2. I'll be in touch. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
Hello BRIGITTE ELKO: First of all, my friend: Thank you for the review nomination. I needed that. But I need more friends like you much, even more. Brigitte, I cannot express to you in words just how glad I am that I've met you, dear lady friend. I like you, Brigitte. But you first liked me.That's how our God has blessed me. With you as a sister in our Lord, Jesus Christ. I am truly blessed. "Thank You, Jesus, for sending me, Brigitte. She will be my friend forever. Thank you for loving me, lady Brigitte. I love U2. I'll be in touch. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Wow, you just made my morning. Thank you for these sweet words. I am also glad to have found you as a new friend.
Holiday, Blessings,
Brigitte