An Ounce of Prevention...
10-Word Poem Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
LOL This says soooo much in just those ten words. Very clever. Now I have to try and write enough to satisfy FanStory's minimum word count for a review.
I liked it.
You spelled everything right.
The picture is a perfect match.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Jan
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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LOL This says soooo much in just those ten words. Very clever. Now I have to try and write enough to satisfy FanStory's minimum word count for a review.
I liked it.
You spelled everything right.
The picture is a perfect match.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Jan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Janilou, for your fine review, and making sense with your compliments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a cautious and health conscious parent's midnight mission to wake up their kid and take him to pishing, something like a punishment; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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This speaks a cautious and health conscious parent's midnight mission to wake up their kid and take him to pishing, something like a punishment; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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You got that right, Alcreator, except the punishment part. It was helping hm learn to do it in the toilet. Thank you for reading and commenting.
