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I adore you, God

An Ode to God.

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5 formatted ode, I Adore You, God, has the required format and begins the prayer that prepares us for another day under heaven. Nice.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine Have a nice week.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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This is a beautiful ode to the dear Heavenly Father. His love is even greater for us and based on unconditional love.

You made excellent usage of word economy, making every syllable count two-fold.

Bravo for this poem!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine Have a nice week.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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A simple prayer, 'tis true.
But God honors the simple prayers just as much as He does the more complex ones.
Besides, with so few syllables to work with how complex can one get?
Good luck to you in the Ode 5-7-5 contest.
~DK

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Dec-2017
    U 2.
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Beautiful poem! Great news! You were in first place with three people total. You got my thumbs up that launched you into 1st place by yourself, and I hope you stay there and win. I feel the spiritual determination and reverence. I feel writer or character needs guidance and is asking for divine guidance. You just got my thumbs up put you in ____place? WELL DONE. truly liberty justice

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks.
reply by Liberty Justice on 04-Dec-2017
    Did you maintain 1st place? truly, liberty justice.
reply by Liberty Justice on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks, dear poet, for comprehensive review and stars and wishing me GOOD LUCK in contest, Today!
Comment from Sharon Meda
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This is a good Ode to God for the Ode 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well done and the picture is lovely.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Very well done five - seven - five is a beautiful prayer. Excellent use of words, artwork, and colors. Thank you for writing and sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
reply by kathleenspalding on 07-Dec-2017
    You're welcome and thanks, blessings to you, too.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is a very good ode poem. Your form of 5-7-5 is in perfect syllable count. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Ellie707
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Beautiful art work photo - the colors are phenomenal. I like the heart which guides the soul of man (or woman).

This person loves deeply and wants to please God above all things. A rarity these days.
Thank you for sharing this with us.

Great job!

Ellie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
reply by Ellie707 on 03-Dec-2017
    You're welcome. Have a blessed Sunday also!
Comment from Janilou
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And He does love you so much too, and probably more than any of us can comprehend here on earth. The poem is very nice. I could feel the heart's call to the Creator and I really love this work.
All the best in the Writing Prompt contest.
No errors noted in your work.
Jan

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a spot on line and syllable count. The ode influence is evident in the joy and praise exuded by the word selections. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.