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I and my husband, Robert

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "I adore you, God"
A prayer, then the walk through our marriage.

33 total reviews 
Comment from nassus1957
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The poem is quite simple woven with understandable words that don't need much interpretation. And I like it more because of its simplicity. Congratulations for winning the contests. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Eastern Weekend.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Traditionally, odes would stretch for miles or at least for several stanzas. They would sing voluble praised on esoteric subjects like "Duty" or "A Grecian Urn". This wasn't allowed to stretch for more than seventeen syllables over three lines, and those three lines summed up, appropriately enough, the three-in-one.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Eastern Weekend.
Comment from Angela Post
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I enjoyed your poem. The art work is also fitting. There is a sense of adoration and connection that runs through a few short words. It is profound. Good work.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Marisela Contona
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I like this. it flows nicely. You have good word choses, and a great style. Keep writing, you have the skill. I look forward to more of your work.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Artasylum
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Hello Robina 1978... It is a perfectly blended piece between the Glorious image the background colors, font colors, well done and great read. yours, diana

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from harmony13
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, clear and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and
compliments both the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend coming soon.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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I can see why this was an award-winning poem. In such few words, you were able to tell a full story. That's true talent. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed weekend.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
Exceptional
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''I adore you, God", is short,succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is a six! I look forward to seeing your next post.




 Comment Written 27-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed weekend. Thanks for the lovely six, highly appreciated.
Comment from meeshu
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superb Robina, last line is the only line that needs to be written
eating up four syllables with one word in line two is nice.
no wonder you won you deserve it.......meeshu

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed weekend.
reply by meeshu on 28-Mar-2018
Comment from karenina
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Congratulations on being a contest winner....but you already were a winner in life with your undying faith and unfailing poetic talent.... This is short yet packed tightly with awe.

Karenina

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed weekend.
reply by karenina on 28-Mar-2018
    You as well.....K
reply by karenina on 28-Mar-2018
    Sure thing.....Karenina