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Betrayed

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4 total reviews 
Comment from Liberty Justice
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SO DARLING! You were in a first place tie with one other person, but my thumbs up just launched you into first place by yourself. Congrats! I hope you maintain your lead. Such a sweet endearing poem about love and begging forgiveness. I thought this was a human talking, but turns out to be a sly cat. truly, liberty justice WELL DONE!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thank you Liberty Justice . for the insightful and encouraging comments. Very much appreciated.
    Oh, and I did win the contest! Thank you for that also!
Comment from Daniel Wood
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Not bad, but I feel the required words were sort of forced into the story. I felt the story itself was forced. It didn't have a good flow to it - just my opinion. I did give you 5 stars as I saw no SPAG errors. Nice job.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Thanks Daniel Wood, for the comments.
Comment from RodG
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I think many cat owners will relate to the Speaker in this story who has betrayed her pet. You set the scene very well with her attempts to apologize. Quickly we get the backstory. What works best is that it is a one-way conversation until the end.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Thank you RodG, for the encouraging comments.
    Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A cute and cuddly story and cats can be hard and cold at times, but they do have a heart and do love, I had a cat for 17 years and he was devoted, I really enjoyed your write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Thank you Dolly. for your encouraging review.
    Much appreciated.