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A Great Line...

ten word witty poem

14 total reviews 
Comment from rama devi
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Congrats on winning the contest with this clever satirical metaphor. Well voiced. Good word economy. A ten word poem is not easy. Bravo!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    thank you so much
reply by rama devi on 04-Dec-2017
    :-))))
Comment from Bill Schott
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This ten-word poem, A Great Line, has the right number of words and reminds me of my great line: If I could redo the alphabet, I'd put U and I together. Everyone simply corrects my grammar.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    That's a fun line --thanks for sharing it.
Comment from victor 66
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A very nice play on words. You have the correct number of words and it is humorous. I would suspect that you will do very well in the Ten Word Poem Contest. I wish you luck.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    Thank you
reply by victor 66 on 04-Dec-2017
    Congratulations!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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A clever approach to the contest and all too true judging by how long relationships last these days. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
    thank you
Comment from kathleenspalding
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OOOOoooo Burn! Good one! Great use of dark humor in this indeed witty poem. Excellent use of artwork, colors and font. Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    Thank you,
reply by kathleenspalding on 07-Dec-2017
    You're welcome
Comment from twotock
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Nice use of a good pun. I imagination people will get it straight away, like, hook, line and sinker! The picture is nicely suggestive of the pun. Nicely done!

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    Thank you,
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is excellent. I wish I had a six. I'm sure this will win the contest. If it doesn't, let me know. I know people if you catch my drift. Have you ever wondered why bad things happen?

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the humorous, encouraging review
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the varied experience of fishing in the sea, that yesterday the catcher fell and today for his line; confidently and freely; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    Thank you
Comment from Sharon Meda
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this is a cute ten word poem. I like the play on fishing and the picture is beautiful.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yep that can happen, those one liners can hook us in and then we done for! A fun play on words and I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    thank you