JOURNEY OF THE NEW AGE GODDESS
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Searching"A series of poems written in a particular style .
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Comment from l.raven
HI Anita, how are you my sweet friend...we can look our whole lives, beat our brains out...and still not get all we want in our journey...sometimes we have more than we need...very well written sweet girl...love your poem...and love your picture....love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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HI Anita, how are you my sweet friend...we can look our whole lives, beat our brains out...and still not get all we want in our journey...sometimes we have more than we need...very well written sweet girl...love your poem...and love your picture....love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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How time flies when you're having a bad time - that's a bad joke dear friend! Just came back to look at the site and here you are with these wonderful words - thank you so much! I've got probs with my heart and am off to have a little help from the cardiologists in a few days time. Have been consumed with tests both medical and mental if you know what I mean :):) They can only do a bandaid job for me - so let's raise our glasses to bandaids!!!
The Muse is not with me and I've not had the heart - ha ha - to read other's work. Perhaps the bandaid will help and I'll come back and do some readin' and writin'. Much love, Anita.
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Oh Anita, I am so sorry my sweet friend...I wish I had a way to help you...you are in my prayers ...please take care...and God Bless...let me know what happens...much love to you as well...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well you certainly can make a descriptive text stick. If I could offer anything it would be to lighten the text, make it bigger or change the background so the text would be easier to read. As it is I believe you will not get as many reviews as you've made it near impossible to read easily. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Well you certainly can make a descriptive text stick. If I could offer anything it would be to lighten the text, make it bigger or change the background so the text would be easier to read. As it is I believe you will not get as many reviews as you've made it near impossible to read easily. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thanks kiwigirl. Your comments are welcome and most helpful. I will take note, Cheers, Anita.
Comment from poetwatch
What did she loose? The place she is searching for is it Paradise? This is a good poem. I have to read all your other chapters. A journey in search of a lost land is taken by those who believe. And to see it at the mouth of the cave. Wow! A fantastic read. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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What did she loose? The place she is searching for is it Paradise? This is a good poem. I have to read all your other chapters. A journey in search of a lost land is taken by those who believe. And to see it at the mouth of the cave. Wow! A fantastic read. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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poetwatch, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem and am pleased if you will read others in the series! Thanks again for your kind words, Anita.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the search for God continues, the feeling in course of the event is live and true, the zeal and confidence and commitment go along make it significant; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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This speaks the search for God continues, the feeling in course of the event is live and true, the zeal and confidence and commitment go along make it significant; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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DR ALCREATOR thank you for your time to read and comment. As usual what you say always finds the deeper meaning in my writing that no one else can see or understand. Something that I am trying to tell that you seem to hear. Thank you.
Comment from Laine Carson
Well described suffering. Your poem intrigued me and made me want to know if she ever found what she was searching to find. It also made me wonder about her battle and if she recovered or died?
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Well described suffering. Your poem intrigued me and made me want to know if she ever found what she was searching to find. It also made me wonder about her battle and if she recovered or died?
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Dear Laine Carson, thanks for reading and reviewing. If my poem left you feeling like that then it did its work. Thanks again, love, Anita.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We can spend our lifetime searching for something only to find that we have it already, I could identify with these words and hopefully when you relax and stop searching, the world is offered on a plate, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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We can spend our lifetime searching for something only to find that we have it already, I could identify with these words and hopefully when you relax and stop searching, the world is offered on a plate, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing Dolly. 'Tis exactly as you say, but that lesson may indeed take a lifetime to learn, hey? And when the 'Aha' insight occurs then you wonder why you battled so hard for so long. Thanks again, Love, Anita.
