Take Time
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Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Rhonda. This is beautiful. I agree. We must take time to enjoy every moment of our lives. There is always something good that happens to us each day. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
Hi Rhonda. This is beautiful. I agree. We must take time to enjoy every moment of our lives. There is always something good that happens to us each day. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thank you for going back and reading an older post. I have to be reminded to take time, myself!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from fastdigits
A poem artistically sculptured in commentary to be taken to heart; pause to smell the roses, see the pictures the clouds paint and never give up hope, never stop dreaming.
Well done
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
A poem artistically sculptured in commentary to be taken to heart; pause to smell the roses, see the pictures the clouds paint and never give up hope, never stop dreaming.
Well done
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for the lovely review.
Rhonda
Comment from emptypage
This is lovely, my friend. I am impressed. These are the things that move us.
I hope you are well. You look WONDERFUL. I'm sure the kids are so glad to have you back... but equally certain all will be ready for winter break!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
This is lovely, my friend. I am impressed. These are the things that move us.
I hope you are well. You look WONDERFUL. I'm sure the kids are so glad to have you back... but equally certain all will be ready for winter break!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you, my friend! I haven't heard from you in a while, and I've been back here for several weeks. I'm glad to see you on. I
I'm doing well, and thanks for the awesome review!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from victor 66
I enjoyed your poem very much. Isn't it fascinating that such simple things in nature, taking the time to appreciate them, can give you so much? They make the things you mention, worth getting out of bed each day.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
I enjoyed your poem very much. Isn't it fascinating that such simple things in nature, taking the time to appreciate them, can give you so much? They make the things you mention, worth getting out of bed each day.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Victor! I appreciate the review and your wonderful comments.
Take care,
Rhonda
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You are most welcome, Rhonda. Happy Holidays.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
With our hurried lives we rarely take time to enjoy everything God has provided for us. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
With our hurried lives we rarely take time to enjoy everything God has provided for us. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Barbara!
I do try and stop to "smell the roses", but sometimes I forget. This sunbeam reached out and found me.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Liberty Justice
Such beautiful color alliterations of the letter "s." Poet describes simple things of life bring enjoyment like watching swam swim. These are things that bring her such joy and peace. NICE. truly liberty justice
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
Such beautiful color alliterations of the letter "s." Poet describes simple things of life bring enjoyment like watching swam swim. These are things that bring her such joy and peace. NICE. truly liberty justice
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you noticed the alliteration. It was actually intentional. haha. I'm not sure where I was going with the rhyme scheme, but it was fun.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Take Time". You rhymed it well and I liked your choice of picture. I guess we rarely take time to just sit.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
I enjoyed reading your poem "Take Time". You rhymed it well and I liked your choice of picture. I guess we rarely take time to just sit.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Marybell!
I appreciate your taking time to read and review my poem.
Take care,
Rhonda
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Rhonda;
It is very important to allow ourselves to have those moments. I love to just get lost in a study of the clouds. I try to make out shapes and love the streams of the sun shining through.
Thank you for the memory,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
Hi, Rhonda;
It is very important to allow ourselves to have those moments. I love to just get lost in a study of the clouds. I try to make out shapes and love the streams of the sun shining through.
Thank you for the memory,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Patty! I like the comment about the clouds. That would have made a nice line in the poem. I guess I got close with the rainbow.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Yes, you are right, Rhonda, the artwork is beautiful. Just like the sentiments in your poem. We don't take enough time to enjoy these things, or sometimes even to notice them, have a lovely weekend, Giddy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
Yes, you are right, Rhonda, the artwork is beautiful. Just like the sentiments in your poem. We don't take enough time to enjoy these things, or sometimes even to notice them, have a lovely weekend, Giddy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Giddy! I appreciate you review, and kind words.
Have a great weekend, yourself!
Rhonda
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a wonderful example of using the right words to paint a vivid and inspiring picture in the reader's mind. It leaves a feeling etched in indelible ink on the heart. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
This is a wonderful example of using the right words to paint a vivid and inspiring picture in the reader's mind. It leaves a feeling etched in indelible ink on the heart. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
Take care,
Rhonda