If I Did Love Thee in the Fall
a love poem for the young and young at heart26 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
This meets the prompt head-on, and has a bit of ballad beat about it, plus very good imagery. Looks like an excellent entry for a "Love" contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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This meets the prompt head-on, and has a bit of ballad beat about it, plus very good imagery. Looks like an excellent entry for a "Love" contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for sharing my love poem. Good ears. It does have a ballad beat. Rod
Comment from Dawn Munro
If I were anyone but Scrooge,
I'd tell you how I love this verse;
I'd paint my face with cheery rouge
'til I looked like I drove a hearse (or worse) - lol.
Alas, the Yuletide beckons all
to phony, pseudo-gaiety!
Bah, humbug, it's no longer Fall!
So love me not; love Deity.
Okay, so this verse really sucks,
but say you like it anyway.
I'll call you Honey, Lovey-ducks,
Hey - maybe even Hemingway. :))))))))
(I loved this! So sweetly evocative. Merry Christmas!)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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If I were anyone but Scrooge,
I'd tell you how I love this verse;
I'd paint my face with cheery rouge
'til I looked like I drove a hearse (or worse) - lol.
Alas, the Yuletide beckons all
to phony, pseudo-gaiety!
Bah, humbug, it's no longer Fall!
So love me not; love Deity.
Okay, so this verse really sucks,
but say you like it anyway.
I'll call you Honey, Lovey-ducks,
Hey - maybe even Hemingway. :))))))))
(I loved this! So sweetly evocative. Merry Christmas!)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to find and read my love poem. I am thrilled you loved it. Rod
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello RodG
I like your poem for as you say
a love poem for the young and young at heart
what about two elderly folks who have been married for sixty three year why can't we also feel
No drizzling mist, no rain-drenched day,
just azure sky and Mister Sol
as arm-in-arm we'd amble on
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Hello RodG
I like your poem for as you say
a love poem for the young and young at heart
what about two elderly folks who have been married for sixty three year why can't we also feel
No drizzling mist, no rain-drenched day,
just azure sky and Mister Sol
as arm-in-arm we'd amble on
Gert
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Ah, yes, this poem is meant for you, too, Gert. Thanks so much for sharing. Rod
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Smiles RodG
from Stan and me
Thank you for writing your poem for us and the younger folks
Gert
Comment from BeasPeas
This is such a lovely romance poem, presented well. Tranquil artwork to match your descriptive piece. All poem is great, but I especially like stanzas two and three. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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This is such a lovely romance poem, presented well. Tranquil artwork to match your descriptive piece. All poem is great, but I especially like stanzas two and three. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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I am delighted you Ike my love poem so much, Marilyn. It was fun to compose.
Comment from Liberty Justice
How lovely and loving writer or character loved this woman in the summer and fall. Seems he is taking trip down memory lane and painting picture of his adventures with this beloved woman. NICELY WRITTEN. truly liberty justice
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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How lovely and loving writer or character loved this woman in the summer and fall. Seems he is taking trip down memory lane and painting picture of his adventures with this beloved woman. NICELY WRITTEN. truly liberty justice
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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I do believe the Speaker in this poem would find cause to speak of his love in any season. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment from June Sargent
You've painted with words such lovely images of love in the fall! The poem appeals to all the senses - from the sound of rustling leaves to the feel of cashmere. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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You've painted with words such lovely images of love in the fall! The poem appeals to all the senses - from the sound of rustling leaves to the feel of cashmere. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you, June, for sharing my poem. I am delighted you found the sensory imagery appealing.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your romance poem "If I did Love thee in the Fall".
You chose a beautiful picture (enough to make any one feel romantic). and you rhymed your poem well.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I enjoyed reading your romance poem "If I did Love thee in the Fall".
You chose a beautiful picture (enough to make any one feel romantic). and you rhymed your poem well.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed the love poem and artwork, Marybell. Thank you for sharing.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
No drizzling mist, no rain-drenched day,
just azure sky and Mister Sol
as arm-in-arm we'd amble on
if I did love thee in the fall.
Absolutely stunning perfect imagery I wish you all the best in the competition love Meiaxx
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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No drizzling mist, no rain-drenched day,
just azure sky and Mister Sol
as arm-in-arm we'd amble on
if I did love thee in the fall.
Absolutely stunning perfect imagery I wish you all the best in the competition love Meiaxx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for your high praise of my love poem, Meia.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a beautiful love poem entry, my friend, I've read a few entries this is the best one yet, I truly enjoyed it. Wonderfully done! Good luck. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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This is a beautiful love poem entry, my friend, I've read a few entries this is the best one yet, I truly enjoyed it. Wonderfully done! Good luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I truly appreciate your enthusiastic praise of my love poem, Kerry.
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You're very welcome. Sorry about the late reply, must of missed an entire page, lol.
Comment from rjuselius
Wow, this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear anonymous! The imagery is breathtaking and the content very true.
Thanks for sharing!
I wish I had six stars left..
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Wow, this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear anonymous! The imagery is breathtaking and the content very true.
Thanks for sharing!
I wish I had six stars left..
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for sharing my love poem, Rebekka, and for your effusive praise and that virtual six.
