Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

An appropriate picture of autumn to compliment an unusual seasonal poem.
A description of an effect likened to a recipe. I don't know if this makes sense to you. LOL

Much described in so few words, an enjoyable poem.

~Mel~

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for your poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for taking time to read and critique zanya

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks another ode to Autumn, an advent in perspective, good appreciation, good harvest and the moon endow excitement of the season in coming; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading zanya