Bejeweled
Ode to Autumn 5-7-57 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to autumn. After shedding all the colorful leaves the branches of the trees will catch the crystals of the cold winter frost in the mornings to welcome winter.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to autumn. After shedding all the colorful leaves the branches of the trees will catch the crystals of the cold winter frost in the mornings to welcome winter.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely descriptive imagery. It's true that as the leaves are gone, the cold replaces the colorful leaves with a "new gown of crystals." That's a beautiful way to say it!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Lovely descriptive imagery. It's true that as the leaves are gone, the cold replaces the colorful leaves with a "new gown of crystals." That's a beautiful way to say it!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a very nice 5-7-5 poem and it portrays the beauty of the autumn season gracefully. It appears your syllable count is correct and the content certainly fits the criteria.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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This is a very nice 5-7-5 poem and it portrays the beauty of the autumn season gracefully. It appears your syllable count is correct and the content certainly fits the criteria.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! However I can't say that I totally get it. The description is powerful yet the wording is slightly used.
Anyhoo, thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! However I can't say that I totally get it. The description is powerful yet the wording is slightly used.
Anyhoo, thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your honest review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A delightful write filled with sparkling crystals just like real gems on a gown and you summed this up in three lines, a great tribute to autumn and the forthcoming freeze, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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A delightful write filled with sparkling crystals just like real gems on a gown and you summed this up in three lines, a great tribute to autumn and the forthcoming freeze, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from oliver818
I like the imagery in the piece, especially the last line about the new gown of crystal. That's a beautiful way to describe winter in the trees and leaves. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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I like the imagery in the piece, especially the last line about the new gown of crystal. That's a beautiful way to describe winter in the trees and leaves. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Appreciate your dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good entry for the ode to autumn 5-7-5 poem.
The picture is beautiful and matches the poem perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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A good entry for the ode to autumn 5-7-5 poem.
The picture is beautiful and matches the poem perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
