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A Quicksand Promise

Promises to ourselves are always the first to go...

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Comment from poetwatch
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Hey that pretty good. I find it hard to say everything in one line. To you if seems like a piece of cake. Good and tasty and then it's gone. We all make mistakes and sometime they come back and bite us. I hope you were able to correct the line and not sink. Very good one liner. :)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the review, poetwatch! I appreciate your comments - they have a lot of personality to them :). ...Yeah, and that quicksand gets me every time...
Comment from Sharon Meda
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This one line poem has a lot of meaning wrapped into those few words.
Very well said.
The picture is stunning as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much Sharon for your positive review! I appreciate the luck as well :). I think I'll need it; there are a lot of great writers on this site! It's truly amazing to see what everyone comes up with!