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Monostich poem

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Comment from Bliss A
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This is quite profound, and it could be interpreted in so many ways. Actions too they say speaks louder than words, our actions our intentions are clearly seen. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the kind comments. Much appreciated - Craig
Comment from dragonpoet
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Congrats of winning the contest. This says that writer's should leave feeling with his work and not just words.

Keep writing

Happy Holidays.

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the good wishes, and thanks for reviewing. Have a great holiday season. Craig
reply by dragonpoet on 06-Dec-2017
    You're very welcome on both accounts, Craig.

    Joan
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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
    This is certainly a wonderful surprise! Thanks very much :)
Comment from rama devi
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AH yes, silence is true wisdom! This reminds me of Loa Tzu's Tao de Ching: those who spek do not know; those who know do not speak. Interesting title. Interesting choice to avoid punctuation. Good aphoristic flavor.
Brilliant brevity and wisdom.
Hope you win!

Good luck!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
    I don't think there's any danger of that, but thanks for the lovely review and the kind wishes, RD. Craig
reply by rama devi on 30-Nov-2017
    :-)))))
Comment from Turtle... who?
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Cute. I enjoyed the humor here. Sheesh. I know I'm not wise, as I can't finish anything. Barely finish a thought, let alone a whole sentence these days.

For what it is worth, I took the time to read this ... almost finished monostitch poem. I was amused.

A wise man might not leave any sentences... or sentences unfinished, but a wise-cracking man ... well.


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Turtle. Good to hear from you, I was beginning to worry that life was interfering with the important stuff, like Fanstory. I'm also missing my regular instalments of Betrayal.

    I thought maybe I could write something without offending anyone - of course, that was a silly assumption :)

    Cheers, Craig

reply by Turtle... who? on 30-Nov-2017
    Ha! Sometimes it seems people live, breath, and eat offense. If there were nothing worth being offended over, they'd probably find something less offensive to be offended at.

    I haven't vanished completely, just can't seem to keep up with everything I want to.
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Hi there;
A great one-line poem entry for the contest. The artwork you chose compliments the piece so well. Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
    Thanks for the kind words and good wishes, Patty. Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
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The end word left off COULD allow the reader to fill in the blank, but the obvious word left out is "undone/unfinished." I have read that St. Therese was so obedient that she DID leave a sentence undone when called to prayer. When she returned, the word was written in gold by an angelic hand. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
    Hi Marilyn - thanks for reviewing, and for the "excellent" rating. I'm glad the angelic hand didn't finish mine for me - it would have quite ruined the intention :) Much appreciated - Craig
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Ok, now, this is rather deep? Is it a riddle? Umm, "A wise man leaves no sentence." Does this mean that a wise man leaves no sentence unwritten or unspoken, or not analyzed? VERY INTERESTING! truly, liberty justice

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    Or possibly.... unfinished. All of the above could be true as well. Many thanks for reviewing, and for the kind comments. Craig
reply by Liberty Justice on 27-Nov-2017
    I was close.Good luck to you, and thanks for wishing me GOOD LUCK in contest Today
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    I know of no way to see who has entered site-sponsored contests, so I'm completely unaware you had posted for it. How would I know? In any case, best of luck to you, and thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from humpwhistle
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And no stone un . . ., I suppose.
Clever approach. I hope your readers get it.
Hard to write a poetic one-line poem.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Lee, for the kind comments. I doubt that some will "get it", but that's nothing new for me lol. Much appreciated, Craig.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a common presage that a wise man leaves no sentence, a right and true statement for a wise man feels the need so he expresses a sentence completely; I liked DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, and I'm glad you got the point. Much appreciated, Craig