Oh, dear Moon..
An Ode to this crescent moon.13 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine.
"WE WILL ALWAYS LOVE AND CHERISE(CHERISH) YOU."
A very good contest entry and I wish you all the best of luck, my friend.
Looking at the picture, the man in the moon could actually be the lady in the moon lol.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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G'day Ine.
"WE WILL ALWAYS LOVE AND CHERISE(CHERISH) YOU."
A very good contest entry and I wish you all the best of luck, my friend.
Looking at the picture, the man in the moon could actually be the lady in the moon lol.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to thebmoon in the sky at night that has the ability to mesmerize many and make them dream about having romance with a lover in their arnd.
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LOVE AND CHERISE(CHERISH) YOU.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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A very well-written ode to thebmoon in the sky at night that has the ability to mesmerize many and make them dream about having romance with a lover in their arnd.
Typo
LOVE AND CHERISE(CHERISH) YOU.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for finding this.
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful ode to the crescent moon, Ine
The moon has always fascinated me. More as the sun.
You cannot look at the sun but as a child I thought the moon was following us.
When I walked in the dark with my parents I thought he walked with us. He was always there.Nice ode Ine, I loved it. Fia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Wonderful ode to the crescent moon, Ine
The moon has always fascinated me. More as the sun.
You cannot look at the sun but as a child I thought the moon was following us.
When I walked in the dark with my parents I thought he walked with us. He was always there.Nice ode Ine, I loved it. Fia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind and understanding review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from sfharper
What a beautiful ode to the Moon. I think you have a typo in the last line Cherise instead of Cherish. I like the different views you share of the moon. Good choice of artwork, it aids the sense of the moon personified.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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What a beautiful ode to the Moon. I think you have a typo in the last line Cherise instead of Cherish. I like the different views you share of the moon. Good choice of artwork, it aids the sense of the moon personified.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from Irish Rain
I love the title of this....it tells you right off this is going to be a lovely fantasy. Nice entry for this contest. In the last sentence, the word 'cherish' is misspelled...blessings....
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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I love the title of this....it tells you right off this is going to be a lovely fantasy. Nice entry for this contest. In the last sentence, the word 'cherish' is misspelled...blessings....
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday. Thanks for the tip.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
or if they couldn't be similar to you.
OH BEAUTIFUL MOON.
WE WILL ALWAYS LOVE AND CHERISE (cherish)YOU.
A beautitful poem I would suggest italitisisng those words rather than making them capital letters which gives the impression of shouting. A truly lovely ode kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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or if they couldn't be similar to you.
OH BEAUTIFUL MOON.
WE WILL ALWAYS LOVE AND CHERISE (cherish)YOU.
A beautitful poem I would suggest italitisisng those words rather than making them capital letters which gives the impression of shouting. A truly lovely ode kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday. Thanks for the handy tips.
Comment from Dean Kuch
There are few things in nature more lovely than the shimmering light of the moon on an exceptionally clear, dark night.
Full moon, half moon, or even a quarter moon--it doesn't matter.
Your ode to lovely Luna's light is well written. Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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There are few things in nature more lovely than the shimmering light of the moon on an exceptionally clear, dark night.
Full moon, half moon, or even a quarter moon--it doesn't matter.
Your ode to lovely Luna's light is well written. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good poem for the Ode Poetry writing prompt.
Well written and the picture painted by the poem matches the lovely picture that you have posted with it beautifully.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This is a good poem for the Ode Poetry writing prompt.
Well written and the picture painted by the poem matches the lovely picture that you have posted with it beautifully.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from Cybertron1986
I enjoyed the originality of this piece. The presentation was appealing as your genuine expression of voice. I enjoyed the humbleness of this poem as you proclaimed the unwanted of "money and gold." Beautifully done
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed the originality of this piece. The presentation was appealing as your genuine expression of voice. I enjoyed the humbleness of this poem as you proclaimed the unwanted of "money and gold." Beautifully done
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an interesting, but fragmented write, leaving this reader to ponder the message. Uneven in presentation, it is an ode, and complies with the prompt, but I feel it requires more attention in its rendering...
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, an interesting, but fragmented write, leaving this reader to ponder the message. Uneven in presentation, it is an ode, and complies with the prompt, but I feel it requires more attention in its rendering...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Ine
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You are welcome...
