Wrong Girl
My son deserves better.26 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well this is quite a different thanksgiving story, with the mother-in-law from hell obviously getting her what she deserves. Well written Maria, I hated her right from the start. LOL
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Well this is quite a different thanksgiving story, with the mother-in-law from hell obviously getting her what she deserves. Well written Maria, I hated her right from the start. LOL
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your review, Pearl.
Comment from RGstar
Yes, tragedy. This sort of remind of one of Shakespeare's pieces. Especially the scenes around the periphery of Ophelia.
In fact, Shakespeare resorted to many of the plots in his plays in this manner. We usually call them tragedies.
A sinister scene.
Good write.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Yes, tragedy. This sort of remind of one of Shakespeare's pieces. Especially the scenes around the periphery of Ophelia.
In fact, Shakespeare resorted to many of the plots in his plays in this manner. We usually call them tragedies.
A sinister scene.
Good write.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading, Roy.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi MJ,
Well, there's nothing like an unremorseful killer, especially on such a glorious day for some! lol
Nice little piece with a good strong voice. She obviously wasn't that bothered about her son either...
G
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi MJ,
Well, there's nothing like an unremorseful killer, especially on such a glorious day for some! lol
Nice little piece with a good strong voice. She obviously wasn't that bothered about her son either...
G
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading, Gareth.
Comment from pbomar1115
I enjoyed the story of the bad mother. I see stories of all kind with the good, bad or indifferent protagonist. I always wonder how the writer will end the story. I also liked the journey to the end very much.
Phillip
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed the story of the bad mother. I see stories of all kind with the good, bad or indifferent protagonist. I always wonder how the writer will end the story. I also liked the journey to the end very much.
Phillip
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for this very generous review, Phillip.
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You're welcome, Maria.
Phillip
Comment from Dean Kuch
Sometimes, Mother does NOT know best, Maria.
If Josh's mom had minded her own business and left him and Dixie well enough alone, they would have all been able to spend more Thanksgiving Day dinners together.
Meddling mothers.
What can you do?
Good story with a nice little "twist" at the end.
Bravo.
~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Sometimes, Mother does NOT know best, Maria.
If Josh's mom had minded her own business and left him and Dixie well enough alone, they would have all been able to spend more Thanksgiving Day dinners together.
Meddling mothers.
What can you do?
Good story with a nice little "twist" at the end.
Bravo.
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Dean. Have a lovely day.
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My pleasure, Maria.
~Dean
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed your marvellous story with a great moral and and a literary lesson in folly. Very well written in great descriptive language and a cleverly worked out plot, with very interesting characters,keeping and commanding my attention. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed your marvellous story with a great moral and and a literary lesson in folly. Very well written in great descriptive language and a cleverly worked out plot, with very interesting characters,keeping and commanding my attention. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your review, Roy. Enjoy your Sunday.
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You too Maria,
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Maria: Wow! You have a mean streak. (lol) I must say you wrote a really mean story.
I actually hate this main character. What a horrible mother she is! How could she not know that her own son might want to taste his wife's food? After all, she is carrying their baby. Sadly, in this world, there are people this cold and evil.
Your story was well - written and full of imagination so it's creative and bold. Good job, Maria.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Good morning, Maria: Wow! You have a mean streak. (lol) I must say you wrote a really mean story.
I actually hate this main character. What a horrible mother she is! How could she not know that her own son might want to taste his wife's food? After all, she is carrying their baby. Sadly, in this world, there are people this cold and evil.
Your story was well - written and full of imagination so it's creative and bold. Good job, Maria.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I hate her too! And yes, she is mean... and more. She's evil.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt story. Being a victim that my first husband was not accepted by most of my family. I deliberately decided not to show my disgust to the choices of my children. As long as they makr my children happy I accept them as my own.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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A very well-written heartfelt story. Being a victim that my first husband was not accepted by most of my family. I deliberately decided not to show my disgust to the choices of my children. As long as they makr my children happy I accept them as my own.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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That's the best attitude.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from trumby
Well done, mate.
Very well written with good character development.
This is probably the ultimate example of an interfering mother-in-law.
She's certainly a very easy woman to dislike.
I'm lucky. My wife can't understand why HER mother thinks so much of me. As she says, "She should try living with you."
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Well done, mate.
Very well written with good character development.
This is probably the ultimate example of an interfering mother-in-law.
She's certainly a very easy woman to dislike.
I'm lucky. My wife can't understand why HER mother thinks so much of me. As she says, "She should try living with you."
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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LOL
Thanks for the generous review and rating.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Maria.
"I didn't. She was loud and uneducated." (lol)
"I had heard of a new substance that left no trace and acted quite quickly." (Can I have the name, please lol.)
"After a few minutes of idle chit(-)chat that"
"'That looks great. Can I try it?' Josh asked his wife." (Ouch! Darn!)
Well done, mate. You deserve a six for this, but I'm out, sorry.
What a great story and such a powerful, sad, twist at the end.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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G'day Maria.
"I didn't. She was loud and uneducated." (lol)
"I had heard of a new substance that left no trace and acted quite quickly." (Can I have the name, please lol.)
"After a few minutes of idle chit(-)chat that"
"'That looks great. Can I try it?' Josh asked his wife." (Ouch! Darn!)
Well done, mate. You deserve a six for this, but I'm out, sorry.
What a great story and such a powerful, sad, twist at the end.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and for noticing the missing hyphen, Fez.
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Always welcome, mate. Keep up the good work.
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Always welcome, my friend.
There's never many edits needed in your work, so I just get to enjoy the read mostly. That's commendable.
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