Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Rewrite That Ad' writing prompt.
The picture is a good match as well. Well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2017

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for taking us behind the scenes of the Geico ad campaign. So now we know why they stick with the annoying lizard.

A couple of comments:
"Personae: Jim: " ( I think you want Jim on the next line.)
"gecco" is spelled "gecko"

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017

Yup, that's how it happens in the biz. Thanks for the heads-ups, Lyenochka! All fixed now. Much appreciated!

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I for one like the cute, but the 15% doesn't impress me either. Great job with this rewrite...even though they didn't get anything changed. Why should today be any different than every other day? I like this one.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017

Sincere thanks for your encouraging comments, Pumpkin!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a right logical order of rewriting endeavour, argumentation finds a way out, interpersonal comments help lead to a decision; focus changed; organised vow; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017

Thank you for reading and commenting, Alcreator.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

You're right. 15% doesn't trip my trigger. When I hear 15%, I don't hear 15% percent. I buy all of my spices online and even when they send me a Forty percent offer I don't respond. This is a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017

Thanks for the compliment, Tom.