I Told Ya So
Song lyrics35 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I Told Ya So", is quite a well-written and entertaining piece. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. More stringent editing though, would improve it considerably. Good luck with the contest.
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"I Told Ya So", is quite a well-written and entertaining piece. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. More stringent editing though, would improve it considerably. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
Comment from webfoot
did you make this into a song? I was just wondering because it really has potential. I can almost hear the music. Are you a musician? Just asking because I'm in the process of making some of my poems into songs these days
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did you make this into a song? I was just wondering because it really has potential. I can almost hear the music. Are you a musician? Just asking because I'm in the process of making some of my poems into songs these days
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
Comment from Lucian Carter
Yes, this does feel like a song, not a poem. You took a simple theme, added some solid language that flows lyrically and ended up with a solid piece. The minor change in the chorus the second time was a really nice, subtle touch. Good work.
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Yes, this does feel like a song, not a poem. You took a simple theme, added some solid language that flows lyrically and ended up with a solid piece. The minor change in the chorus the second time was a really nice, subtle touch. Good work.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
Comment from patcelaw
Author, this is a wonderful work and I can see in the hands of a musician with the skill could turn it into a ballad. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
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Author, this is a wonderful work and I can see in the hands of a musician with the skill could turn it into a ballad. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very good contest entry. You should do very well. Maybe even win. Contests are hard and it's difficult to know how reviewers will vote. Good luck.
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This is a very good contest entry. You should do very well. Maybe even win. Contests are hard and it's difficult to know how reviewers will vote. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from LIJ Red
I couldn't hang a melody on this, somehow. Makes me think of Night Moves and
its coda, the best part...got imagery and discontent in the words. Excellent.
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I couldn't hang a melody on this, somehow. Makes me think of Night Moves and
its coda, the best part...got imagery and discontent in the words. Excellent.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from Boogienights
Great song lyrics..so vibrant and descriptive. I could hear the music in my head..kind of a jazzy sound, perfect to dance to. Did you see it that way? I loved it.
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Great song lyrics..so vibrant and descriptive. I could hear the music in my head..kind of a jazzy sound, perfect to dance to. Did you see it that way? I loved it.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I could hear the rhythm coming through in your words and I loved the repeated lines 'I told ya so', very descriptive of a passionate love flame that eventually died, love Dolly x
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I could hear the rhythm coming through in your words and I loved the repeated lines 'I told ya so', very descriptive of a passionate love flame that eventually died, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from H. Rebecca
I wouldn't quite say it is not emotional. A country song comes to mind. However, this is the first set of lyrics that I've ever reviewed here, so I don't know how to gage them. And it is precisely because I don't have suggestions for improvement that you're getting five stars.
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I wouldn't quite say it is not emotional. A country song comes to mind. However, this is the first set of lyrics that I've ever reviewed here, so I don't know how to gage them. And it is precisely because I don't have suggestions for improvement that you're getting five stars.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from oliver818
I really like this song. I love the imagery you use, for example about the splintered wood from the bed, it's very evocative and powerful. Thanks for sharing this and I hope this song can be heard by many people.
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I really like this song. I love the imagery you use, for example about the splintered wood from the bed, it's very evocative and powerful. Thanks for sharing this and I hope this song can be heard by many people.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
