Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written six-word poem. We will fight for freedom in many ways before we actually realize it comes from within ourselves. There are no place else we can find real freedom.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

A very powerful six word poem. Freedom never comes easy, those attack it, who knows why. But life without freedom is a stifled. I am greatful everyday to be living in a free country. God bless America.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Well to answer your own question Kahpot:

"Freedom is yielding under constant battle"

This sure seems like a good start to me. Happy New Year my friend! xoxo Kiwi

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Freedom is yielding under constant battle.
I always copy and paste these poems so I can interpret as I write.
Although only 6 words they have so much meaning.
While ever there is conflict and war freedom will never win and will yield or give in to this battle.

dip

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

What a wonderful review many thanks, and Happy New year****kahpot