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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Everything about me abhors war and always have, for it is no solution to anything and only causes devastation fuelled by hate and greed why can people not see what is before their eyes? I think you have done brilliantly with your six line poem it is a difficult thing to achieve especially in a meaningful way like this good luck with the competition love and regards Meia x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Everything about me abhors war and always have, for it is no solution to anything and only causes devastation fuelled by hate and greed why can people not see what is before their eyes? I think you have done brilliantly with your six line poem it is a difficult thing to achieve especially in a meaningful way like this good luck with the competition love and regards Meia x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you and me too I do not like war at all, ****kahpot
Comment from Joy Graham
You got me with your message. Your six words made me stop and think a while. I agree with you. I think this is a fine contest entry. Yup, you got six words as required. I counted them lol! Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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You got me with your message. Your six words made me stop and think a while. I agree with you. I think this is a fine contest entry. Yup, you got six words as required. I counted them lol! Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Many thanks, this word poem is easy for me to understand****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your entry for the six-word poetry contest. I'm not sure what it would take for people to realize that war is not the answer. Reality is that the wars are fought by political powers. The troops on the ground are there for collateral damage.
Your six words pack a powerful punch,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your entry for the six-word poetry contest. I'm not sure what it would take for people to realize that war is not the answer. Reality is that the wars are fought by political powers. The troops on the ground are there for collateral damage.
Your six words pack a powerful punch,
~patty~
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
I absolutely agree. Still it seems in our efforts to profess freedom, we constantly use war to announce its name. Sad.
My best to you.
Have a great New Year, author.
RGstar
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I absolutely agree. Still it seems in our efforts to profess freedom, we constantly use war to announce its name. Sad.
My best to you.
Have a great New Year, author.
RGstar
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent answer for understanding that war is not the answer.
Freedom is yielding under constant battle
Very good six word poem for the contest. Good luck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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An excellent answer for understanding that war is not the answer.
Freedom is yielding under constant battle
Very good six word poem for the contest. Good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
Freedom NEVER yields to any outside force, kahpot.
With all due respect.
As a veteran of our United States Marine Corps I'm here to tell ya that it never will as long as Americans have breath in their lungs.
War is sometimes a necessary evil for the betterment of all.
Should Hitler been allowed to continue with his wholesale slaughter of Jews and other minorities during WWII?
'Nuff said.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Freedom NEVER yields to any outside force, kahpot.
With all due respect.
As a veteran of our United States Marine Corps I'm here to tell ya that it never will as long as Americans have breath in their lungs.
War is sometimes a necessary evil for the betterment of all.
Should Hitler been allowed to continue with his wholesale slaughter of Jews and other minorities during WWII?
'Nuff said.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Nobody told me that Americans were the only people on this earth, my mistake,Nuff said****kahpot
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I didn't say that.
I said that Americans will never kowtow to the whimsy of dictatorships or monarchy.
You and your country may do as YOU please.
~Dean
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Hello, My Freind, if I got this wrong, sorry, but in my country, Australia, we are facing constant terrorism, the same as you, Idiots driving into crowds, Bombs, We have fought as bravely as any country, read or view, book or film called Kakoda, But Freedom is not what it was, we and maybe you are looking every time we here a BANG****kahpot
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All I was trying to say is that, yes, war is awful and war is evil.
But sometimes it is a lesser evil that must be waged in order to combat an even greater evil.
My comments were in no way meant to offend you in any way.
Take care, kahpot.
~Dean
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My humble apologies my friend, I have been a bit poorly and had anger against the world, when I should not have. Needed some help with an operation, my two brothers had to think about it?, please forgive, I am OK ( bit better now) so will try and catch up with all reviews and messages.
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Nothing to forgive. I'm happy to hear you're feeling better.
Stay well, kahpot.
~Dean
Comment from Bichon
A very good poem. You have put a very truthful and important message in such few words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, fabulous entry.
Chloe
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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A very good poem. You have put a very truthful and important message in such few words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, fabulous entry.
Chloe
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Six Word Poetry' writing prompt.
Good message in a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Six Word Poetry' writing prompt.
Good message in a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like these words because they are so true, why do we always have to fight to be free? So many people want to suppress for so many devious reasons, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I like these words because they are so true, why do we always have to fight to be free? So many people want to suppress for so many devious reasons, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from oliver818
I like this poem. Six words is not a lot but you fixed a solid message into it, one I agree with totally. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I like this poem. Six words is not a lot but you fixed a solid message into it, one I agree with totally. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
