Follow Your Dreams
A tetractys, 5 line poem7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. Congratulations on your win with this fine tetractys on following our dreams. Nicely composed with a positive message of encouragement. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Hi June. Congratulations on your win with this fine tetractys on following our dreams. Nicely composed with a positive message of encouragement. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from sfharper
Wonderful message of finding the ability to fly from the nervous and beautiful butterflies inside. It makes good use of the form and of the photo which is lovely. I find the tone peaceful and very easy to read, enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Wonderful message of finding the ability to fly from the nervous and beautiful butterflies inside. It makes good use of the form and of the photo which is lovely. I find the tone peaceful and very easy to read, enjoyed it.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thank you. We all have the ability to rise above any occasion to fly to other places to pursue our dreams.
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You are welcome
Comment from Liberty Justice
Ooh, ooh, now that's BEAUTIFUL, and it even looks magical. Looks like a good luck charm. Love your title, also giving hope and spiritual inspiration to your readers. Photo looks lovely. You got my thumbs up that launched you forward. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Ooh, ooh, now that's BEAUTIFUL, and it even looks magical. Looks like a good luck charm. Love your title, also giving hope and spiritual inspiration to your readers. Photo looks lovely. You got my thumbs up that launched you forward. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thank you! We all have that special something inside us to inspire us to imagine, create, and fly. Just look for it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Tetractys contest entry.
Very colorful.
The picture is beautiful and matches perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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A good Tetractys contest entry.
Very colorful.
The picture is beautiful and matches perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from RodG
I like this imaginative way of personifying that wondrous thing within us that inspires our dreams and prods us to follow them. The picture makes "it" visible.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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I like this imaginative way of personifying that wondrous thing within us that inspires our dreams and prods us to follow them. The picture makes "it" visible.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Yes, we all need that little something inside us to give us that extra push to imagine, create and fly. Thank you for your insights.
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Oliveforlove
I like the flow and the gentleness of the words, giving a sense of the butterfly. The structure works too though if there was a comma after within rather than enjambment the next line has a growing power and confidence to it.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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I like the flow and the gentleness of the words, giving a sense of the butterfly. The structure works too though if there was a comma after within rather than enjambment the next line has a growing power and confidence to it.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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I think you're right about the comma. Appreciate your taking the time to read and offer your insights.
Comment from mermaids
There is a good feeling that comes through your words. I like the image of the butterfly within us. Your poetic form is unique and adds to the strength of the poem.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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There is a good feeling that comes through your words. I like the image of the butterfly within us. Your poetic form is unique and adds to the strength of the poem.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
