Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ine.

It looks right to me, mate.

A very good contest entry and I wish you the best of luck in it.

How are you and Robert coping? Things are improving I hope.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine . Have a great week. Now we are both ill. Me not so bad.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Well, very interesting title of movie. Did the movie make people shout or cry is very interesting question, but movie seems like a testament of love from a child to his father. lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Ine, this is a great little four line poem. To display ones love in public is a good and a natural thing. I hope you do very well in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a beautiful and blessed Sunday.

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

No one knows for sure what kind of adult a child will turns into. This is very well written. There is a very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine Have a great weekend.

reply by c_lucas on 11-Nov-2017

You are welcome Ine. Charlie

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written four line poem. There are many ways to show our love to one another. It is always a beautiful gesture to not be afaid to express love n public.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine Have a great weekend.

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Four lines. BOO can count to four. He - he. Window shop? What kind of place is that? Looking for the baby. Paris. thanks for explaining via the author notes. I gather, this was in the newspaper. I'm a little lost. Never been to Paris. Looks good to BOO. Have a nice night! BOO!~

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine Have a great weekend. We saw it on television.

reply by BOO ghost on 11-Nov-2017

OK. Have a good one, yourself.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Hi, Inne, perhaps you should of added a little in your author's notes as like some not familiar until I read up a little, then understood your meaning.
Art or film? Closely bonded despite the questions around it.

Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine Have a great weekend.

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

Yes, you met the parameters with 1/5/5/9. Good job on the syllable count. I must be missing something or am not smart enough to fully understand this poem. Maybe the image is confusing me.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. See the review of Thomas Bowing.

reply by Brigitte Elko on 11-Nov-2017

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

The movies is where I live to escape life. So I like the presentation. There are some movies that do make you wonder... Art is subjective and so art films exist. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

Interesting. I wonder if he did make them shout/cry. Your sylible count looks good to me. Best of luck in the contest. Nice job.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.