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In The Darkest Night

Morning muse was working.

17 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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I am glad you followed your muse's lead and created this poem of encouragement. I admired your alternating rhymes in the quatrains and dramatic illustration. I liked your repeats of "the darkest night" for emphasis. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your lovely review, Joan.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Excellent change from ABAB to AABB giving the piece power with your words of what God can do when all seems bleak and lonely

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks for the lovely review, Barb.
Comment from Sharon Meda
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A good spiritual poem.
Well written and the message is strong and clear.
And the picture is perfect.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    Thanks for the review, Sharon.
Comment from DR DIP
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Well your muse certainly worked well Pat. This is a wonderful write showing your faith again You write them with sincerity Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

dip

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Dip.
Comment from lyenochka
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Your muse is right on, Patricia! I know that you've experienced some really dark nights and pain, so your words of comfort carry a lot of truth and weight. Thank you for this encouragement to always remember God's compassionate Presence with us.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Helen.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Pat

= Wonderful lightning bolts. Keep them coming!
= Beautifully written poem of faith and dedication.
= Artwork is a wonderful match for a great presentation.

Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Jackie.
Comment from smileycloud
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and a very strong and powerful light buld it is that you spat out of your mind
lovely flow and cadence
so easy to read
the beautiful message is put forward with dignity and grace
blessings
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Smiley.
Comment from Treischel
Exceptional
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I would definitely say that your muse surely is. A great spiritual message that flows oh so smoothly. It had feeling that flowed alng with that message. Very well done.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Tom. Thank also for the six.
Comment from Teri7
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Thank you for writing this Patricia. It really touched my heart as I read it. He is truly our light in the time of darkness and trouble, but always! Great wording and imagery. love, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Teri.
reply by Teri7 on 10-Nov-2017
    you are so welcome my friend!
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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This one has beautiful rhythm to go with the uplifting message. I know what you mean about the lightning bolt. I, too love it when inspiration strikes, and the words flow easily, like an e-mail from God. This is good!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Brenda.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 13-Nov-2017
    You're welcome.