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One Must have Darkness to Offset the Light

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Comment from honeytree
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The art work is
very suitable for
these words written
in everyway.

I would keep my presence
well away and live another day.

Honeytree

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much, Annie. Those are wise words and I'll take them to heart.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I love the passion in this. The emotion. We could all learn from this. I hope you see the light and can smile again. I completely understand why you feel the way you do. Hang in there friend.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    I thank you so much, Liphe. I am so happy to see the real 'you' emerging like a butterfly.
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, another dazzling write by this exceptionally gifted and prolific write - what depth of emotion must has stirred these descriptive and dark words - in easy and smooth rhyme and rhythm...

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    I thank you, Eve. I've been working so excuse me for my tardy reply.
reply by evesayshi on 13-Nov-2017
    No problem at all, Diane, and you are very welcome indeed...Eve
Comment from c_lucas
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When working on a new post, sometimes I take a chapter from my life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    I thank you very much, Charlie.
reply by c_lucas on 12-Nov-2017
    You're welcome, Artemis. Charlie
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a very dark and powerful poem about an evil force (a demon?). It was a little scary and the image for the poem perfectly.If such a creature exsisted it would be hard to believe in the light. Thanks for such an interesting, well written poem.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you once more, boogienights.
Comment from Ricky1024
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Hi this is wonderfully written great theme and imagery it was very deep and dark about Satan's control which of course is True to this very moment in time as I dug deeper into it it got more Stark & More Starkey as a reality and descriptive measures brought it and moved it Forward wonderfully and by the way I lost my big-girl panties a long time ago if you have a spare pair send them to me here at fanstory dr. Ricky 1024 LOL

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    LOL. Thank you, Ricky. I don't know if I have that many to spare.
Comment from teols2016
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Darkness and light are an important and interesting combination. This piece doesn't strike me as too dark...or maybe I just have a high tolerance for darkness. It does create some interesting imagery in a reader's mind. Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    I appreciate your review, teols. I will admit that this pace is beginning to exhaust me.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Artemis

= So sorry you are going through such a hard time.
= I do hope it leaves you soon, and tranquility returns.
= Stunning artwork and formatting, which you always do to perfection.

Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    I appreciate your precious time, Jacqueline.
Comment from Hitcher
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I believe we all carry a little bit of darkness with us, it is always there waiting for its chance to be set free and wreak havoc with our emotions and cause us to do and say shit we never normally would. It takes a lot of strength to banish it back into the shadows. Cool poem friend : )

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Hitcher. It has become quite exhausting.
Comment from Kaye Ouston
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Great pic for this evocative poem. I feel that you have captured the essence of a soul once light but pulled down through dark experience to evolve into a demonic character, vampire or witch perhaps? The meter of the poem flows well and I was captivated till the end.

Great work

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    I appreciate your insightful and receptive review, Kaye.