Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This short love poem, Conversation Piece, in four words, shows us that even fewer than that is needed when love is as understood as breathing. Nice.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017

Thanks for responding. I do appreciate it.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Having been married to my husband for 38 years I completely understand the meaning of your words. This is a lovely entry to the love poem contest, and I like the image you paired it with. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for reading and responding. I do appreciate it. elaine

reply by Boogienights on 14-Nov-2017

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your love poem "Conversation Peace". You kept well under the fifteen words with the beautiful message and picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks for responding. elaine

reply by marybell1 on 15-Nov-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from JennaG

Excellent

I found this to be a lovely poem. You've captured the essence of true love so perfectly and you didn't even need all 15 words to do it. I'm impressed! I really like your play on words in the title "conversation peace" instead of "piece". Very clever and a wonderfully romantic poem. Well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

I appreciate your thoughts and comments. elaine

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning

I liked how in four words you've generated so many peaceful and loving images of those who feel secure with the love they receive and give in return.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

I do appreciate your reading and responding. elaine

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Yes, that is love--when words are no longer necessary. Your poem would work even without the image. Your word choice are accurate to convey a precise message about two people being so close, they do not need to share words. Ah, that is romantic and symbiotic!

Thank you for sharing. I wish you much success with you fine entry.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for your comments. They are appreciated. elaine

Comment from zekeziemann

Excellent

Well described and the flow of the poem truly fits the contest. Well done.
Those of us married a long time identify.
Zeke

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and responding. elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A cute love poem.
This is lovely. And that is the ultimate love, isn't it?
Well done.
The picture is perfect.
Good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for your comments. elaine

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I'm pretty sure you've nailed it.
Sorry I'm six-less.
You might want to get this switched to poem mode.
Right now, it's formatted as prose,
and the category reads General Flash Fiction.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks for your comments. I did take your advice and go back and switch to proper mode. I appreciate your direction. elaine

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your love poem. Yes, it is so true that there isn't a real need for conversation or words when you're simply sharing a moment with the one you love,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading my words and for your comments. elaine