Redeeming Our Time
etheree poem (see notes)13 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for reminding us that we have 86,400 seconds as a "gift of life" each morning. I enjoyed your Etheree form and your good wishes. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reminding us that we have 86,400 seconds as a "gift of life" each morning. I enjoyed your Etheree form and your good wishes. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review. my dear friend had sent me an e-mail about the gift and I felt it lent itself well to making into a webpage.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very beautiful and informative poem you have penned. I never thought of it that way until now. That is really amazing to think of that way. I feel so bad because there is so much time I have wasted in my life! Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and informative poem you have penned. I never thought of it that way until now. That is really amazing to think of that way. I feel so bad because there is so much time I have wasted in my life! Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Teri.
Comment from jaded831
Well stated. You are a perfect example of a faithful person sharing the wonders of Our Lord. Your faith touches your readers and gives the hopeless hope. Your poetry is very special. Thank you for your great talent.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Well stated. You are a perfect example of a faithful person sharing the wonders of Our Lord. Your faith touches your readers and gives the hopeless hope. Your poetry is very special. Thank you for your great talent.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Jaded.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is well written with a good message.
But I think you've miss counted line 8. I get a count of 7 for line 8.
Otherwise well done.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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This is well written with a good message.
But I think you've miss counted line 8. I get a count of 7 for line 8.
Otherwise well done.
Sharon
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Sharon.
Comment from smileycloud
your very encouraging and inspiring poem is presented beautifully
the message is so revealing of the world
it also speaks of our example being so very important
it looks just like a Christmas tree
well done dear FS friend
blessings
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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your very encouraging and inspiring poem is presented beautifully
the message is so revealing of the world
it also speaks of our example being so very important
it looks just like a Christmas tree
well done dear FS friend
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Smiley.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I do believe you have two sevens but in the whole content, it is excellently written and such a tribute to faith and grace
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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I do believe you have two sevens but in the whole content, it is excellently written and such a tribute to faith and grace
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Barb.
Comment from lyenochka
What good words, Patricia! Yes, we are accountable for our own walk with God and if others see that He is real and answering us with the wisdom we need for life, may they be blessed, too!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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What good words, Patricia! Yes, we are accountable for our own walk with God and if others see that He is real and answering us with the wisdom we need for life, may they be blessed, too!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Helen.
Comment from mrsmajor
A well written etheree form poem, with a message well associated by Biblical scripture...I also appreciated your author notes,
I try to live each day, as close to what God wants from me, but have never thought about it as you have described....Thanks for sharing, and giving us something to think about...Thanks for sharing!
Blessings,
Victoria
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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A well written etheree form poem, with a message well associated by Biblical scripture...I also appreciated your author notes,
I try to live each day, as close to what God wants from me, but have never thought about it as you have described....Thanks for sharing, and giving us something to think about...Thanks for sharing!
Blessings,
Victoria
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Victoria.
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You're welcome, Pat, my pleasure...
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You're very welcome, pat, I like the form,, and the poem...
Comment from Treischel
Outstanding thoughts, very well expressed in this spiritual Etheree. I Have just one small suggestion. The word "Since" looks a bit too large, and could be as easily expressed by the the word "As". Its a thought, to make that pyramid perfect. Still, very well done, and expressed.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Outstanding thoughts, very well expressed in this spiritual Etheree. I Have just one small suggestion. The word "Since" looks a bit too large, and could be as easily expressed by the the word "As". Its a thought, to make that pyramid perfect. Still, very well done, and expressed.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Tom.
Comment from Sasha
Lovely work with this etheree poem. I had to look up the rules since I am so bad at remembering them. Your poem is beautifully written and I love your notes too. I love how you calculated how we should use the precious seconds we are given each day.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Lovely work with this etheree poem. I had to look up the rules since I am so bad at remembering them. Your poem is beautifully written and I love your notes too. I love how you calculated how we should use the precious seconds we are given each day.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Sasha.
