Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Hello,DIP: I have been a little busy over the past few days. I see that my messages has reached 51 posts. I know that you have posted at least 6 poems so I will try to read all of them today.

This poem is nice. I did see the analogy that you mentioned and it was a good one. It is good to get a refreshing change, like a breath of fresh, like love. Great Job!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thanks again Tier I liked the analogy as well

dip

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

I WISH I COULD SEE THIS BEAUTY
YOU SPEAK ABOUT I HAVE BEEN TO AN
OCEAN ONE TIME IN MY LIFE

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

I will always paint the picture for you Abby

xdip

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Good analogy. This poem is refreshing and well done. Good flow and rhythm to your piece. The rhymes are not forced but natural and flow well from line to line. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thank you as always Sandy

dip

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

This is expertly written using the metaphor and then the real thing to describe life together and how things change over and over

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks again Barb i am glad you liked this one

dip

Comment from closetpoetjester

Exceptional

Oooh I think I know what you mean.
A little precipitaish, yes? haha
Well a mouth down sou...oops I mean a mouth FROM down south would have to be a pretty good new play toy.

Let's face it...a change is as good if not somewhat better than a holiday.

Great job.

Oooh, I saved some sixual pleasure JUST for this OUTSTANDING occasion.
See? You're special.
Read your profile comments LOL

Pxx

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

That is so special to me.A six from my favourite rhyme mistress.

hey while i have you, (I wish) I am going away on a surfing trip next Thursday for 10 days and have just been informed the internet will be down due to a landslide on a nearby island it could be down for weeks
This means I will not be able to post anything on Fanstory for that duration. That's equivalent to 20 poems! I am devastated lol
I have never been off line that long in the whole time I have been coming to fanstory.
Looks like I'll have to go cold turkey.

dip

reply by closetpoetjester on 09-Nov-2017

LOL You'll be right

Smuggle me up there in your suitcase...and you won't be thinking about poetry haha



You can...





teach me how to surf...duh!!

xx

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well done, Dr Dip.
Change is seldom a bad thing.
This seems to be a love poem and a philosophical poem rolled into one.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks so much Sharon much appreciated

dip

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Dr D,
I really like your analogy incorporated into this poem. You did a great job expressing it along with the great rhymes & smooth flow. Thanks for the notes, too. When the south wind blows here, it brings up all kinds of 'stuff'--some good some not so good. Jan

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks as always Jan much appreciated

dip

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Coming from a little grey island separating the North Atlantic from the North Seas a southerly change here would be just as welcome bringing warmth and sunshine to the endless grey. Love personified as weather has many faces but as long as it represents a change for what we consider the better that's all right with me.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks again Panty much appreciated. A southerly change in the southern hemisphere is conversely a cool change coming up as far as the Antarctic.

dip

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I know I would get bored without a definite seasonal change like we have here. I love cold, misty days. Autumn is my favorite time of year.

You're enjoying the change, and that's good. It would monotonous without it. 8-)

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

I think changes in the weather are necessary for many reasons it can change your attitude and demeanour as well

thanks as always Yvonne

dip

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi dip;
Sounds like a 'southerly change' is just the thing needed to spice up an old love, or bring a new love to your door. Well done with your rhyme and rhythm,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

thanks so much Patty much appreciated

dip