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My First Time

True story

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Comment from JennaG
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Oh wow! I'm sorry that happened to you. It must've scared your dad half to death.
That was something I always worried about when my son played baseball. I found your story intriguing and very well written. I also like the picture you chose. It looks like it might be from that movie The Sandlot. That is one of my all time favorite baseball movies. Great job with this piece! :)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thanks a lot Jennifer reading and reviewing this unfortunate happening to myself and for reading and reviewing my work which I truly appreciate. I'm glad when people get hit in the head. They go unconscious because I didn't feel the pain until afterwards.
    Take care and have a good one.
    Alex
Comment from BOO ghost
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Yep, a line drive can hurt and injure if it hits you in the head. Guess it knocked you out! That is bad luck for your first pitch. Outfield would be safer. Was it a single, double, triple or home run? Did you get a black eye? Them balls are hard as a rock! Yep, you don't have to be told. yep, I bet the other team thought it was funny. BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much,Boo, for reading and reviewing this writing which I truly appreciate your time and effort and I really like your welcoming comments.
    Alex
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing this poignant story. Of course, the title had me thinking it was an entirely different kind of story, but that's just me.

Well done and good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, Patty, for reading and reviewing and thanks for the good luck we all can use that.
    Alex
Comment from mmonaghan777
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Awwwwww. Owwwww. That makes me give a caring parent laugh. That's a good one. The picture makes it real. Now I know to get out of the way.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    M Monoghan, thank you very much for stopping by and reading and reviewing which I truly appreciate. All that is CD actually much except for the crack of the bat and seeing the ball about twenty feet from me and then I don't remember much. But I felt afterwards and that I'll never forget. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing it again, and take care and have a good one.
    Alex
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Well, they say every bullet has name on it, not sure about baseballs though... lol

This is painful, been there - agony.

Good job
GMG

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you GMG for reading and reviewing this writing which I truly appreciate and take care and have a good one.
    Alex
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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But you won the game and was named most valuable player. You stopped what would have been a home run. Sometimes you have to take one for the Gipper.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much Thomas for reading and reviewing my work which I truly appreciate so much.
    So your name is Gripper.
    Alex
Comment from teols2016
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How unfortunate. Maybe the rest of memories will return. At least you've got the signed ball. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, Teols, for reading and reviewing my work which I truly appreciate your time and effort into doing so.
    Alex
Comment from Sharon Meda
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This is a good Humorous fifty word story.
The story is clear in fifty words, not always easy to do.
Good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you Sharon for reading and reviewing my work and for the good luck wishes which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
    Alex
Comment from jenintorre
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I suppose this incident must have been quite funny for the onlookers but not so funny for you if this is a true story. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much Jennintorre; for reading and reviewing my work which I truly appreciate so much and thanks for the good luck. I can always use them.
    Alex
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh dear! A knock out! This happened to me when I played hockey at my school, the bully off resulted in the bat making contact with my head and I had a black eye! I could identify with your words, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, Dolly, for reading and reviewing this work which I truly appreciate.
    Alex