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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Exceptional
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THIS IS BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND AND THE PICTURE
SURE LOOKS LIKE GOD HAS A HAD IN THE WRITE YOU HAVE JUST WRITTEN

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks Abby for this very fine review this was one of my better pieces one of the one I wrote similar a couple weeks ago at Barbara Henderson said that this is definitely your best thing you've ever written so I think my works are starting to intensify and get deeper and More Beautiful especially in time in Four Christmases go so thanks again Ricky 1024
reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 08-Nov-2017
    I also love Barbs reviews and her writing
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about a man's dream of having a son at childhood, and after marriage he got a son but unfortunately he died at a very young age; bereaved father pays homage to him; I liked.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks Al a young man like my son comes along once in a lifetime to be able to pass away and decide to donate his organs first before he went is a miracle and a blessing thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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This one can be taken different ways depending on the mood of the time. I take it that every year memories bring life and death over and over.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Life and death death in life you breathing once you breathe in twice and then final you take that one last breath and then you'll face the man named death November 26th 2003 about 8 months after my son Jason passed away my wife has stopped taking her medication had a heart attack warning sign was a death breath I'll call it 6 C is to experience it is quite shocking the body in an is almost in a conscious state that eyes are just starting to close you hear a sucking in of allowed allows large amount of oxygen before the passing out stage because once the heart stops of course there's no Oxygen there's no breathing I brought her back from that when they lost at the hospital less than an hour later thanks as always talk to Ricky 1024