Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good six word poem.
You've told your story perfectly in only six words.
Well done.
Good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thank you for your comments and review.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I hate to think it, but i'm not sure that it will ever end. As long as there are hate and public media wanting to get good ratings. I'm sure we will see more ugliness.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thank you for your comments. I'm afraid to think you might be correct

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes our world seems to be caught up in a permanent cycle of tragedy -local - international - and the Web brings it all right into our homes -no escape - well portrayed here

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you for your review and comments. Gramlot8

Comment from robina1978

Exceptional

This is a great entry for this contest with six words. You said a lot about these up-to-date things that are happening just now. It is also very original. I love it. Bets wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for the review and especially the 6 stars!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I somehow get the feeling that if weapons weren't readily available, there'd be less of these - call me crazy but that's how I see it...

A fine piece saying a lot in with little.
GMG

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you for your review and comments.