Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Hate, as your short poem points out, is a most self-destructive emotion. It is our fate to have it turn inwards on ourselves. You express a universal truth here and I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Well they do say that there is a very fine line between love and hate. Such strong emotions show such depth of feeling.

nicely wrangled into the format.
Best of luck
GMG

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks.