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1-6-1 Rhyming Time

A 1-6-1 contest entry

15 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Congratulations on your win, Christine. The kitty cat is a pretty good poet and he did make the words rhyme--and won a prize. Short writes are always the hardest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    Hi Marilyn, Thanks for you congratulations forr my 1-6-1 Rhyme a bit of fun I like these challenges and to win is a bonus Cheers Christine
Comment from Mark Valentine
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I just read you thank you poem and had to come here to read the original. Nice. Congrats on the contest win. These short ones are usually harder to write than they look.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Hi Mark, ,Thanks for coming back and for your review I was pleased to have taken this one out and it appears it appealed to many . Yes sometimes they do take longer but don't tell anyone this took me less than a minute to do Shhhhh Cheers Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 1-6-1 poem, Rhyming Time, has the appropriate structure and uses an apt photograph to punctuate the idea that rhyming can be both easy and difficult depending on what you we want to say and how we want it perceived. Nice.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Hi Bill Thanks for your review for my 1-6-1 a bit of fun to tackle the actual contest requirements like this LOL Sometimes I just can't help myself Cheers Christine
Comment from marybell1
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I liked your 1-6-1 poem "Rhyming Time". I liked your choice of photo. (I wouldn't be without my rhyming dictionary. You covered all the rules for this genre.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Hi Marybell1 Thanks for reading my 1-6-1 a little tongue in cheek ( perhaps a bit cheeky LOL) I enjoy these contest and appreciate your time to read and comment Cheers
reply by marybell1 on 08-Nov-2017
    I enjoyed it very much and it has just received my vote.
    Marybell1
Comment from Kerry Robinson
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lol, This is a funny 1=6=1 poem, my friend. Very cute I must say, love the picture as well. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Kerry, just a bit of fun sometimes I just cant Help myself with these contests LOL Thanks for your review and good luck wishes Cheers
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Kerry, just a bit of fun sometimes I just cant Help myself with these contests LOL Thanks for your review and good luck wishes Cheers
Comment from gramalot8
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Well, I'd comfortably say that your wish comes true this time. You have indeed written a 6 word poem that rhymes. That in itself can be a great achievement. Not easy to say something profound, that rhymes and makes sense to the reader. Great job and good luck in the contest. Gramalot8

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Gramalot8. Thanks for your review I enjoy having a try at these contests and thought this may bring a smile Cheers for you good luck wishes
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Gramalot8. Thanks for your review I enjoy having a try at these contests and thought this may bring a smile Cheers for you good luck wishes
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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So like my recently departed cat Bertie, I miss him so much. Such a cute picture and excellent poem for the competition. I hope you do well good luck and very kindest regards love Meia x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Meia, I am sprry for your recent loss our pets are very much family and I know how sad I was when I lost mine last year.Thanks for your good luck message and acheers to you my friend xx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem and definitely rhyming this time. A lot of practice leads to perfection. A very good picture to complement your poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Sandra, Thanks for your review and I had a bit of fun with the contest rules LOL Glad you liked the picture I thought it fitted Cheers
Comment from Liberty Justice
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CUTE! Powerful statement of self-confidence in one's self, hoping that words will rhyme this time. Indeed, your photo is very darling and your words do RHYME this TIME. lol liberty justice Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Liberty Justice Thanks for your review and I had fun with this one ( sometimes I just can't help myself ha ha) Yes I liked the image of the cat with the rhyme book too Cheers
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good, and
you have the required rhyme.
-I guess the cat has provided
a special rhyming dictionary for help!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Hi Pam, Yes it is the cats fault LOL, A bot of fun but I was pleased to find this image after I wrote the words Thanks for a look in Cheers
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Nov-2017
    You are welcome. It was a good image to find.