Down to Earth Again
Use These Words: fantasy, rival, gas, float Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A pirates loot is carefully stored and then reality can turn to fantasy and dreams as floating on air can be exercised without guilt, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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A pirates loot is carefully stored and then reality can turn to fantasy and dreams as floating on air can be exercised without guilt, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Dolly. Your remarks are always appreciated. (The chest, by the way, was full of hunan bones.)
Comment from Mimi Linny
Cute entry for the "Use these Words" contests! Very creative use of the words to describe your fantasy and relating them to your love of Lenore, your pet lassie and her love of any food-related "contraband." Especially loved how you used the required word, "Rival!" You had some pretty good rhyming sequences with rhythm being a little off in spots... Otherwise, great and unique way of using the required words! Really enjoyed!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Cute entry for the "Use these Words" contests! Very creative use of the words to describe your fantasy and relating them to your love of Lenore, your pet lassie and her love of any food-related "contraband." Especially loved how you used the required word, "Rival!" You had some pretty good rhyming sequences with rhythm being a little off in spots... Otherwise, great and unique way of using the required words! Really enjoyed!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem so much, Linny.. I appreciate the compliments. Considering your praise, I'm thinking the 4-star rating probably was given by mistake. If so, it's easy to fix, and I hope you' won't forget to do it. Thanks.
